A Naruto Story [complete]

[Maeve Avari]

crap, what's it doing? why me? Oh my god! I'm going to suffocate! yelled Shourai in her mind.

"Orae! What's it doing?" asked Harmony.
"Harmony, love. Calm down, it's crystalizing her body." the human sacrufice...

"But, but why her? What she ever do?" pleaded Harmony, sickened by the scene in front of her. The water had began to glow and was hardening her bady into a slightly darker than sky blue color.
"The demon needs a vessel in witch to be sealed, this is the seal you've long awaited. Her soul is being torn from her body, but the demon remains." If only I could...Yes! maybe I can! Let's hope I'm not killed for this... "Her soul will forever be at peace, with all the other great warriors who seeked truth and justice in our warring and terrible world."

"I see, she's going to heaven." suggested Harmony
"I guess that's what you might say." agreed Orea. She then proceeded to go to the very edge of the water and yelled "Be at Peace Shourai! Welcome Home!"

The words spoken barely reached Shourai's ears, or what she thought were ears. Then it happened, her soul completely detached itself from the crystalizing body, whitch immeadiatly turned dead black. She felt as though she was flying, probably because she was. Never in her life had she felt so care free.

bam.

She was in the castle, only it was clean, and new, and more beautiful than ever.

A booming voice, as majestical as a sounding trumpet, yet as soothing as the reed flute, and even still declarative like a bass drum, and even as unique as the oboe, sounded through out all the passages of the halls a poem.

"If you can keep your head when all about you are losing theirs and blaming it on you,
If you can trust yourself when all men doubt you, but make allowance for their doubting, too;
If you can wait and not be tired by waiting,
Or be lied about, don't deal in lies,
Or being hated, don't give way to hating,
And yet don't look too good nor talk too wise;
If you can dream and not make dreams your master,
If you can think, and not make thoughts your aim,
If you can meet with triumph and Disaster, and treat those two imposters just the same;
If you can bear to hear the truth you've spoken
Twisted by knaves to make a trap for fools,
Or watch the things you gave your life to, broken,
And stoop and build 'em up with worn out tools;
If you can make one heap of all your winnings,
And risk it in one turn of pitch-and-toss,
And lose, and start again at your begginings,
And never breath a word about your loss;
If you can force your heart and nerve and sinew
To serve your turn long after they are gone...
And so hold on when there is nothing in you
Except the will which says to them; "Hold on!"
If you can talk with crowds and keep your virtue,
Or walk with kings - nor lose the common touch,
If neither foes nor loving friends can heart hurt you,
If all men count with you, but none too much;
If you can fill the unforgiving second with sixty seconds' worth of distance run,
Yours is the Earth and everything that's in it, my son!"

-END-

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A/N: the story's over, deal with it. Oh, and the poem isn't mine. It's by Rudyard Kipling  

[Purple dragon lady]

That's a nice poem! I haven't really read any Rudyard Kipling... maybe I should.
And she has reached heaven. How nice.  

[Maeve Avari]

not quite. Postloug is coming to explain.  

[Maeve Avari]

Post-louge (sp?)


Shourai had been living in the castle for several years when a young person came to her and asked for her teachings. She did as asked.

Her students where tought that there was more beyond the world that they lived in. They were tought of a great and holy power that only the heavenly knew, that only the just and the right would ever meet.

Soon enough she was teaching many students. One day, two girls came to her, one from the north and one from the south. The one from the north was strange, as if she wasn't human, she was named Harmony.

The one from the south had suffered greatly. Her long life love had killed her entire clan, and she sout refuge in Shourai's teachings. She told this young girl all about space, and the future. She also told her of the black hole peoples. Then, she spoke to her of another girl, a girl who would come with a pink haired woman. She would be the double black hole. She was to change her name from Seelia to Shourai. Shourai tought this woman all she knew.

Her name was Hinata.  

[Purple dragon lady]

I see! So she taught Hinata... Ach, what a time loop.  

[Maeve Avari]

yup, it was confusing on how to finish it, but i think it worked.  

[Maeve Avari]

Okay, anybody reading this (*cough* Purpledragon lady *cough* xRyuuki *cough*) I'm doing another fanfiction. It's hopefully going to be better. I'm replacing sakura ('cause she's the main girl) with Ayona (in my journal). Sooo... yeah. If you want to read it, I'll post it here. grrr....I can't think of a name! something to do with music.

Musical Imortality?
Notes to lead the path?
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[Purple dragon lady]

Titles should reflect the core of the story... Other than that, I don't know.

Sure, post it! I'd like to read it!  

[Maeve Avari]

okay.  

[Maeve Avari]

GAH!!! I still don't have a name for it. It's a little depressing butthen again, well no, it's just depressing. Ayona's past is sad so that's all I'll say. I've got an Idea of how to start it but not sure on the total outcome, oh well.  

[Lady Okori]

I am utterly horrible at creating names for stories. The only reason I thought of "Seeing the Truth" was because it was ironic and I just happened to have a very sarcastic attitude that day, heh. And, the "Resurrection" title for the Blades of the Shinigami story, took a full month to think of, if you guys can remember that, xD.

Time loops are so confusing, sweatdrop . I think I got yours. She does die, right? I can't quite remember...  

[Maeve Avari]

to be frank. wait no. I hate that exampley thinger. GAH! To put it simply, I have no idea. Take it as you'd like.  

[R0KI]

ummmm i like the begining and the end but i thought the middle was really confusing........i like the time loop thing i thought that it was really crative