"Stick Together No Matter What!!!"(Need Help With The Story)

[Hallows Eve Sage]

((well most of the time ^^; there will be some ups and downs ^^ ))  

[Khana Uchiha]

((yea =.="))  

[Hallows Eve Sage]

((Does anyone mind if we jump ahead a year? ))  

[Khana Uchiha]

((I don't and can I say one thing:Sayuki probaly won't be on for a month because she's been grounded))  

[Hallows Eve Sage]

((uh oh. poor sayuki... ))  

[Khana Uchiha]

((yeah I know))  

[Hallows Eve Sage]

((so, i guess were kind of stuck again... I can't really move my story on without people gonk ))  

[Khana Uchiha]

((i know))  

[Akatsuki_Leader_Pein1]

*comes out of the sky* *shuts my eyes when he opens them the rinnegan is there* i am Pein the leader of the Akatsuki and i am here to kill weaklings  

[Khana Uchiha]

((?))  

[Khana Uchiha]

((oh well...Just jump ahead a year and I'm changing Khana's name to Kairin but I'll still use Khana to say what she is doing))

-_-One year later-_-

Khana walked down the main road to Konoha.She stopped at the gate."Its been awhile..." Khana said blankly.Khana walked to the hokage face mountain and explored the tunnels again and again till she got tired and went to her room and fell asleep on her bed.  

[Hallows Eve Sage]

((Hey pein. did you put in a profile on this thread yet? ))

Raikou walks through the tunnels that were in the Hokage mountains. "It's amazing how this place always seams to relaxes me." He said looking around with a smile. If Khana were to come across him he would now have a leaf head band on, with a patch on his arm with the mist village symbol. "It's amazing that It's only been a year..." He said with a half smile. "I wander it I will run across her today." As he said that he noticed the door to her room has been moved at some point. Getting his guard up he starts to open the door, slowly.  

[Khana Uchiha]

Khana hears footsteps and turns invisiable.How could anyone have found these nobody has found them in a while..  

[Hallows Eve Sage]

Raikou opens the door looking in to see no one. "Hm...must be getting old..." He said quietly looking over the door nob as he was about to leave. He stops suddenly as he sniffs the air. "That...chakra...could it..?" He said looking in the direction the sent came from.  

[Khana Uchiha]

Whats he doing here?"What do you want?" Khana said still invisiable.