[CRIT] Please critique my character!

[oneironym]

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Ghost
Looking For: General crit, please?
Quest Link: Hira Morifune  

[Chi Sohma]

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Daemon - Succubus
Looking For: Overall criticing // Mainly looking for Fear ability help?
Quest Link: [ Link ]  

[DraconicFeline]

Crit Please!
Characters Race: Monster- Sentient Tree
Looking For: General Crit- will trade
Quest Link: Here  

[vampireluvr97]

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Vampire - Undead
Looking For: Critique anything. I don't mind. smile
Quest Link: Alice Marie LaToure  

[Ryndilee]

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Inugami - Demon
Looking For: Crit and anything else~
Quest Link: Here  

[molly8972]

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Subspecie - Demon
Looking For: Crit on everything!!
Quest Link: Here  

[Izumi Tenshi]

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Micail the Hellhound- Monster or Demon
Looking For: Mostly just crit. This is my first time doing this and I want to make sure I'm doing it right. I'm not sure if he would be considered a Monster or Demon.
Quest Link: HERE  

[Horticulturalist]

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Fae - Demon
Looking For: On everything, does his family stuff make sense. Does his personality work, and do I need to add more? Do I need to worry about FEAR now? How can he be improved?
Quest Link: HERE  

[- h a b i b a t i -]

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Monster - Hippocerf
Looking For: Everythinnnggg D: But especially on her personality and FEAR.
Quest Link: Click!  

[Viva Viola]

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Nurse - Reaper
Looking For: Crit on everything really x3 I wanna make sure Im doing this right.
Quest Link: here  

[Kitomyx]

Crit Please!
Character's Race: (Victorian-themed) Grim Reaper - Reaper
Looking For: Crit on everything, because even after reading a bunch, I'm still not sure if I got anything right. XD And I'd also appreciate it if someone could point out any contradictions she might have with shop cannon because I know shinigami greatly vary no matter where you go. I read the info thread on their race, but even so...
Quest Link: Right Here  

[Sasha_dreamer]

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Subspecie - Ghost
Looking For: Crit on FEAR, and race help? Though if you read something that has potential for a good critique feel free to do so as well! I just want to make sure I follow the guide and still make sense!
Quest Link: HERE! YA!!  

[Grumpy Paw]

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Ghost/Jaakhin
Looking For: Come at me Bro! Crit EVERYTHING. I want to make sure I got his form ready 100%
Quest Link: Danny Lighting  

[E t e r n a l x Melody]

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Monster - Jade Moon Rabbit
Looking For: Anything and everything that doesn't look good. Any kind of crit will help. c:
Quest Link: Click this one.  

[Nyqol]

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Demon - Yokai
Looking For: Crit on everything. D: Since I don't know what I'm missing or doing right.
Quest Link: Myst