Crazies, Phsycos, and Lunies...Oh my!!! (highschool rp)

[Okami_Shirinai]

Kaderot looked at her, "shiyoki?" he said staring hard at her. Subzero put his hand on sukia's shoulder, "no one is normal in this room, see we have a sayain two living machines.. not sure what mitsuka is and a survivor of a clan murder.. whos normal here" he asked.  

[minaki c h i i]

Mitsuka glared at Subzero."Hmph..."She whispered and sat outside the door."Kaderot....-kun...."Shiyoki whispered. Sukia didn't answer and looked away."Get your hand off of my shoulder before I break every bone in your body..."Sukia growled and flashed her Sharingan at him.  

[Okami_Shirinai]

It did nothing but he did remove his hand. Kaderot looked at her and shook his head then back at shiyoki, "yes shiyoki im here"  

[minaki c h i i]

"Help....me....Kaderot....-kun...."She whispered louder and moved her hand towards his.  

[Okami_Shirinai]

Kaderot got closer toward her, "yes, but how" he asked.  

[minaki c h i i]

"Kiss....me..."Shiyoki whispered,her eyes barely opening.  

[Okami_Shirinai]

Kaderot leaned over to kiss her but sazabi stopped him, "wait what if it does something to harm you?" he asked worryed.  

[minaki c h i i]

"It does nothing...its a simple kiss Sazabi-san..."Sukia said,glancing at him.  

[Okami_Shirinai]

Kaderot nodded and kissed shiyoki.  

[minaki c h i i]

Shiyoki's face became alive again and she kissed back.  

[Demonic Repentance]

((God, you'd never make it as an author. Try imagery... Using words that help describe things. That might have worked better as, say, something like this: "Shiyoki felt warmth pounding through her body as quick as her heart. Her eyes opened slowly, carefully peeling from their forced sleep. She pressed her lips against Kaderot's, happy."

See? With that, one can see it vividly in one's mind.))  

[minaki c h i i]

((I was freaken Tired!....My brain wasn't working right....I had a headache at the time too Chaos!))  

[Demonic Repentance]

((Oh... *Hugs* Sorry, then.))  

[minaki c h i i]

((Whatever....*looks other way*))  

[Okami_Shirinai]

(hey hey no figthing ok)
Kaderot felt her kiss him back. His heart leapt with joy as he now knew she was a wake. Sazabi and subzero looked at each other and smiled knowing their master was happy and that made them happy. Kaderot embraced shiyoki as he continued to kiss her and moved back a little to looked at her face, "shiyoki.." he started to say tears of joy coming down his face, "im so happy your awake, i couldnt be without and was so worried when i found out you were in a coma."