Emwah's Critique

[EmWah]

nrasjaa

*lies down* rate me of princess of rating!! wait let me put on mah guitar!! *runs*

Uhh I think you may have changed your outfit since you posted that, so I'll just rate your current one.

I can see you have tried to create flow with the 3 main colours in the piece, but it's not spectacular. What happened?! You're usually mega-spectaular! It's a fairly nice outfit, but I would expect better from a girl with your experience and reputation 3nodding

7/10  

[EmWah]

n00dlez0rz

rate me plleaasse..lol i wont stop till i beat 6/10..

Oh my dear old n00dlez. Tis good to see a girl with goals!

I do think you're getting better but you've still got a little way to go yet. First of all, with hair that has such a stand out colour like yours, you really need some colours in your outfit that will make it look less out of place. So maybe the use of more blue/red/pink/purple shades will help you out a bit. Secondly, trackies under skirts is a big no no. Sadly I learnt this the hard way in primary school... it's just not the way to go... You have done well with the black elements in the outfit - it seems that they create a kind of border to your person, which is good for focusing attention. Winged anklets = good. They look great with everything. So does kiki.

5.7/10  

[nrasjaa]

EmWah

nrasjaa

*lies down* rate me of princess of rating!! wait let me put on mah guitar!! *runs*

Uhh I think you may have changed your outfit since you posted that, so I'll just rate your current one.

I can see you have tried to create flow with the 3 main colours in the piece, but it's not spectacular. What happened?! You're usually mega-spectaular! It's a fairly nice outfit, but I would expect better from a girl with your experience and reputation 3nodding

7/10

eh i dunno what happened sweatdrop i think i was searching for something a little more and i kinda missed the mark sweatdrop  

[EmWah]

Yeah. It's okay. No one can be 100% all the time 3nodding  

[Chemical_Kitten]

Well, Jubbie gave me a 10/10... what do you think? sweatdrop  

[EmWah]

Chemical_Kitten

Well, Jubbie gave me a 10/10... what do you think? sweatdrop

Yes, well, you know Jubbles and I have different perspectives on things 3nodding Your outfit is done quite well and has alot of that flow element, but it doesn't really stand out.... It doesn't really scream awesome from the roof tops... you know?

My rate is 8/10  

[n00dlez0rz]

EmWah

n00dlez0rz

rate me plleaasse..lol i wont stop till i beat 6/10..

Oh my dear old n00dlez. Tis good to see a girl with goals!

I do think you're getting better but you've still got a little way to go yet. First of all, with hair that has such a stand out colour like yours, you really need some colours in your outfit that will make it look less out of place. So maybe the use of more blue/red/pink/purple shades will help you out a bit. Secondly, trackies under skirts is a big no no. Sadly I learnt this the hard way in primary school... it's just not the way to go... You have done well with the black elements in the outfit - it seems that they create a kind of border to your person, which is good for focusing attention. Winged anklets = good. They look great with everything. So does kiki.

5.7/10

XD thanks!.....rate the new look?  

[Chemical_Kitten]

What do you think? sweatdrop  

[EmWah]

n00dlez0rz

XD thanks!.....rate the new look?

Sorry it's taken me so long to reply sad

Ahh you have quite a cute look going there. Love that green and purple together. Everything is put together in quite an attractive fashion, but it still appears a bit jumbled.

6.7/10  

[EmWah]

Chemical_Kitten

What do you think? sweatdrop

SexxXxayy 3nodding

How you make that cat outfit look so good I know not. Everything is just so whee Beautiful!

9.7/10  

[Chemical_Kitten]

EmWah

Chemical_Kitten

What do you think? sweatdrop

SexxXxayy 3nodding

How you make that cat outfit look so good I know not. Everything is just so whee Beautiful!

9.7/10

Thankyou so much!!! heart

Do you think the shackles should be removed though?  

[EmWah]

Chemical_Kitten

EmWah

Chemical_Kitten

What do you think? sweatdrop

SexxXxayy 3nodding

How you make that cat outfit look so good I know not. Everything is just so whee Beautiful!

9.7/10

Thankyou so much!!! heart

Do you think the shackles should be removed though?

No no! The shackles create a nice repetition of the belt shape. Repetition = good!  

[DNA_Guru]

Rate me Emdog. 3nodding  

[WellzY]

Rate my attempt at sexayness yes?  

[EmWah]

DNA_Guru

Rate me Emdog. 3nodding

Ahhh very nice indeed. Style to the max. Very good use of darker colours. Without the guitar it would be a good outfit, but the guitar just says HEY LOOK AT ME! I'M DRESSED WELL. Like that. Very loudly.

9.3/10