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 Posted: Thu Dec 06, 2007 3:48 pm
(*leaning closer to the screen, still crying* Here it comes... the final trial...)
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Posted: Thu Dec 06, 2007 3:53 pm
[Eek! So much pressure, friend!] Finally his voice came. "No, you love him." Brooke shook her head. "No, no, Justin..." It was foolish for her to fall for him. He lost his love and was not even himself, yet, but... But?Justin knew that her doubts were in reason. "... but," he said, "You do not love me." Brooke fell to her knees and held to his legs. She pleaded he say not so.
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Posted: Thu Dec 06, 2007 3:58 pm
( crying I can feel mine heart being cleaved in twain... How could Justin be so... so... so goddamn COLD!?! crying crying crying )
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Posted: Thu Dec 06, 2007 4:29 pm
[Jealousy? Patience, friend.] He shook her off and turned. She looked up at him. His eyes glowed a golden colour. The voice, now was recognizable, and rung loudly out. "You look beautiful, child." Justin vanished.
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Posted: Thu Dec 06, 2007 4:40 pm
(And so it felt like Mobius' heart shattered, as brittle glass against the onslaught of a mallet. He staggered, to and fro, trying to regain balance in all senses, trying to make sense of the occurence. Finally, on his knees, he cried out a single word skyward, a blast of sheer desolation, innocence incarnate:
"WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY???")
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Posted: Thu Dec 06, 2007 5:15 pm
[O' you of much melodrama, I know very well that this was not good writing. You make mockery of me to act so.]
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Posted: Thu Dec 06, 2007 5:35 pm
(I intended no such mocking... sad )
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Posted: Thu Dec 06, 2007 5:45 pm
[Apologies, sir. I spoke too sharply. I know you have the utmost kind intentions. My lack of confidence must not be directed to spur others. I am very sorry.]
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Posted: Thu Dec 06, 2007 6:05 pm
((Brilliant writing, Bellabie! I almost cried, 'cept for the fact that my eyes are drier than the Sahara for staring at the screen all day and I'm sleepy.(Which for some reason keeps me from crying.)))
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Posted: Thu Dec 06, 2007 6:23 pm
[You're both very kind, but I haven't a clue of from where you have found this idea.] Brooke spoke to the empty air, as if blind herself. "J-justin?"
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Posted: Thu Dec 06, 2007 6:28 pm
Zach walked over. "I'm sorry... But I'd recognise that aura flash anywhere. He's been whisked away by some divine force."
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Posted: Thu Dec 06, 2007 6:30 pm
The voice was that of her mother. Who was he, really?Brooke struggled to understand. She looked at Zach. "Forever?"
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Posted: Thu Dec 06, 2007 6:33 pm
Zach was unsure of what to say. If her will was strong enough, he might be pulled back, but that was doubtful... Or if he was returned, which was equally doubtful... After a while he said, "I'm... Not sure..."
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Posted: Thu Dec 06, 2007 6:39 pm
Brooke looked downwards disappointed and then at Mobius. Her brow furrowed and she turned away, cursing herself.
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Posted: Fri Dec 07, 2007 11:55 am
Mobius had lost the power to incur emotions in the expanse of The Warp, but he found he could still sense them quite easily. He turned back to Brooke, barely able to fly with the burden of that sadness. Once again, he hugged her.
Listen. I am so incredibly sorry. It is my fault he left. He felt the hug earlier and misconstrued it for more, and he went away. I know how it feels to have lost a loved one, and it's horrible. Your heart probably aches so hard you think it'll burst or turn to stone. But I wish to help. I will do anything. I will recieve any punishment you can offer. I'd even move the stars themselves just to pay for my sin.
He knelt, head down.
Do your worst, for I have done mine.
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