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 Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2004 3:20 pm
Your poetry is pretty good. Though the first two are a bit... dark... for my happy mood right now.
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Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2004 3:20 pm
Twilight of Sorrow Your poetry is pretty good. Though the first two are a bit... dark... for my happy mood right now. yep, sorry, i just posted all i had submitted to da.
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Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2004 3:21 pm
OnlyMikomi I like the third, Falkon...nice ^^ *flips and tickles Twilight with her tail, trying to pin him down by his wrists* *snickering in attempt to not laugh* tickling isn't fair... *pushes your back feet so you fal on top of me* hehe...
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Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2004 3:22 pm
Viralfalkon Twilight of Sorrow Your poetry is pretty good. Though the first two are a bit... dark... for my happy mood right now. yep, sorry, i just posted all i had submitted to da. The first kinda sounds like something Ive written...
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Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2004 3:23 pm
*pushes up flipping Komi onto her back with me on top holding her wrists* one good turn *Tickles Komi's sides*
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Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2004 3:23 pm
Twilight of Sorrow OnlyMikomi I like the third, Falkon...nice ^^ *flips and tickles Twilight with her tail, trying to pin him down by his wrists* *snickering in attempt to not laugh* tickling isn't fair... *pushes your back feet so you fal on top of me* hehe... *playfully nips at his shoulder, then scampers away* Evil....
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Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2004 3:25 pm
OnlyMikomi Twilight of Sorrow OnlyMikomi I like the third, Falkon...nice ^^ *flips and tickles Twilight with her tail, trying to pin him down by his wrists* *snickering in attempt to not laugh* tickling isn't fair... *pushes your back feet so you fal on top of me* hehe... *playfully nips at his shoulder, then scampers away* Evil.... hehehe.... you started it. No wait, I did didn't I?
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Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2004 3:25 pm
Eddily *pounces Spotty* Hopefully she's still here... *stalks then pounces* Hi there! *the scene reminds you of tigger and pooh or calvin and hobbes* Oh and PS I can't draw worth spit. And Komi I can resize pictures.
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Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2004 3:28 pm
Twilight of Sorrow OnlyMikomi Twilight of Sorrow OnlyMikomi I like the third, Falkon...nice ^^ *flips and tickles Twilight with her tail, trying to pin him down by his wrists* *snickering in attempt to not laugh* tickling isn't fair... *pushes your back feet so you fal on top of me* hehe... *playfully nips at his shoulder, then scampers away* Evil.... hehehe.... you started it. No wait, I did didn't I? *pokes* Yes...you did....you bad little furry....*tackles and gnaws lightly*
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Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2004 3:28 pm
gives an example of her poetry:
Memories, thoughts, emotions fade
Only the scars remain
Only the scars remain to remind you
To remind you what you did
What was done to you
To tell you never forget
Never
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Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2004 3:29 pm
Spotty, the pic im curious about is on page 24 of the intro thread...can you resize that?
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Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2004 3:29 pm
shyembrace gives an example of her poetry: Memories, thoughts, emotions fade Only the scars remain Only the scars remain to remind you To remind you what you did What was done to you To tell you never forget Never thats a bit...depressing...
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Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2004 3:30 pm
OnlyMikomi Twilight of Sorrow OnlyMikomi Twilight of Sorrow OnlyMikomi I like the third, Falkon...nice ^^ *flips and tickles Twilight with her tail, trying to pin him down by his wrists* *snickering in attempt to not laugh* tickling isn't fair... *pushes your back feet so you fal on top of me* hehe... *playfully nips at his shoulder, then scampers away* Evil.... hehehe.... you started it. No wait, I did didn't I? *pokes* Yes...you did....you bad little furry....*tackles and gnaws lightly* *murrs softly* *strokes your tail*
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Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2004 3:32 pm
Spotty-Chan Eddily *pounces Spotty* Hopefully she's still here... *stalks then pounces* Hi there! *the scene reminds you of tigger and pooh or calvin and hobbes* Oh and PS I can't draw worth spit. And Komi I can resize pictures. Yay C+H! Heya, heh.
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Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2004 3:32 pm
Viralfalkon shyembrace gives an example of her poetry: Memories, thoughts, emotions fade Only the scars remain Only the scars remain to remind you To remind you what you did What was done to you To tell you never forget Never thats a bit...depressing... yep
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