Tigerx81 - Saren Omashi, M.I.A.?

[AgonizingChance]

I read it  

[The Sadistic Toan]

AND????? spit it out man how did i do? what did you think??  

[AgonizingChance]

HArsh as ever, but it was comical. Try coloring it though..but other than that I wil not reveal anything...and i goto go for the night...good night all...well i might be on in like 3 hours  

[The Sadistic Toan]

i thought about throwing a rock at him to get him down but then though "nah that harsh xD"  

[clebs]

it was really good  

[The Sadistic Toan]

thanks i think xD  

[clebs]

Toan i need help with my bio in my tamer profile can u help me
read Tiger's post to get a better idea of what i need help with  

[The Sadistic Toan]

i dont know try adding more detail like your personality, how you social life, stuff like that. add stuff about when you first met your digimon. when you get more experince add details of your adventures ito it  

[clebs]

ok ill let u know when some changes have been made  

[clebs]

ok let me know how it is now.  

[The Sadistic Toan]

.......well it something. you just talk to you digimon, it like you didnt even have a body you just talk to it. try something like this

Toan woke up to find himself in a strange land with a lot of strange creatures crawling around. Toan turned his head to the right to see a Dracomon eating his food. Toan smash his fist on the Dracomon head and the Dracomon yelled in pain and turned to look at Toan "What was that for!?" Toan took a step back a bit shock that this thing spoke but his anger return "Your eating my food, how is an overgrown lizard gonna eat my food and talk back to me when i give the punishment for it?!"


Try writing like that instead of

where am i? "In my world" How do i go to my world? "What world would that be"

read a book and used that for refrence  

[clebs]

lol kk. if u don't mind could i use that but change the names  

[The Sadistic Toan]

i actually prefer if you use your own creativity but do what you want  

[clebs]

lol ill try to come up with my own  

[Teh Ace of Shades]

Whoa Toan might not be all bad...o wo HURRAY FOR THE SECRET GOODNESS INSIDE OF EVERYONE! :'D