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Posted: Thu Apr 03, 2008 4:10 pm
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Posted: Thu Apr 03, 2008 4:14 pm
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Posted: Thu Apr 03, 2008 4:23 pm
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Posted: Thu Apr 03, 2008 4:28 pm
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Posted: Thu Apr 03, 2008 4:40 pm
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Posted: Thu Apr 03, 2008 4:49 pm
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Posted: Thu Apr 03, 2008 4:56 pm
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Posted: Thu Apr 03, 2008 5:11 pm
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[whoo flahsback XD *wiggles fingers* :p]
"Aridas...i wnat you to have this." He looked down at his mothers hand and take steh ring form it, truning it over in his fingers. "is- is this gold?" He asks, his young voice surprised.
He was 18 - a restless young man holed up in a market town in Georgia. His father was a shopkeeper and they lived above the shop: he had only ever seen gold on his parent's weddingr ings and the jewelry of the higher ladies that occaisonally pushed by. He was surprised by how warm the metal was. It was both shiny but dulled somewhat in an inner age he coudln't define. "It is." She said, and her voice was sat. She motioned of rhim to sit on teh bed, and sat next to him. She placed her hand on his - his pure white as it had always been, hers a warm tan. "What's worng?" He asked, concerned. He motioned ot give her the ring back but she psuhed his ahnd away. He looekd down at it again. it had a large ruby on it, with a black engraving of a bat in it. "Aridas, tehr ewill never be an easy way to say this - but I think you already know anyway. your dad..he isn't your true father." Aridas frowned and looekd at her eyes. hers were brown and full of both worry and sadness now. Hi 'dad's were brown. His were a deep green. "I know." He siad quietly, and broke eye contact. "So..." "I didn't hae an affair, I swear to it. "then what?" "I..." she drifted off and patted his hand again. "I didn't mean for it to happen. Your real father...the man ... I am glad that he is not around. When i first learned I was preganant I was dismayed but, darling, I'd never regret having you. not for a second." He was quiet and fronwing and she motione dot teh ring. "afterwards...he left me this ring. It wa sall I had. I barely even remember whta he looked like." "do you even know the guy's name?" His voice was accusing..he didn't mean it to be. she wa sobviosuly hurt by it, but was patient. "Vladimir. he siad his name was Vladimir."
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Posted: Thu Apr 03, 2008 5:29 pm
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Posted: Thu Apr 03, 2008 5:38 pm
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Posted: Thu Apr 03, 2008 5:53 pm
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Posted: Sun Apr 06, 2008 1:45 pm
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Posted: Sun Apr 06, 2008 2:21 pm
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Posted: Mon Apr 07, 2008 6:08 pm
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Posted: Tue Apr 08, 2008 5:22 pm
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