The Weeping Willow (Poem by MeIAm)

[MeIAm3330]

The Weeping Willow
A poem by Me
The weeping willow sits atop barren hill
Weather taken toll
Time taken it whole
With no place to go or story to tell
It only weeps here awaiting hell
There is no debate to live
There is no wait to die
Goodbye

The weeping willow is gone
Tear turn to tore inside it’s heart
Only hollow wait there now
After the weeping willow took its final bow.

I've gotten some comments that it was good but it was from good friends of mine and I want an honest opinion not just a friend being nice. Please comment and rate. Much appreciated.

P.S if you don't know what the poem means (Metaphorically speaking) please don't rate it but feel free to comment. Thank you.  

[MeIAm3330]

Pink Plastic Ninja

Sorry I'm not a huge poetry fan so I'm not quite sure as to what to say about it.

I guess I never really appreciated poetry much especially since I had a lot of English teachers ruin it for me. And I never liked it much to begin with. D:

But there's gotta be someone in this guild who enjoys poetry and can give you their input. 3nodding

Lol thx anyways  

[MeIAm3330]

XxGrieverxX

I can't write poetry, but I love reading it. :]
Very nice. :0 I like how some parts rhyme and your word choice.
Have anymore poetry? I WANTS TO READ MORE.

lol sure ill PM it to you  

[MeIAm3330]

*shrugs* Maybe? Maybe not? Who knows. But I have to agree it does sound awesome. mrgreen  

[MeIAm3330]

XxGrieverxX

3nodding

mrgreen