I'm trying to get feedback on pieces I have written. My plan right now is actually to post in a couple different writing Guilds and see which place seems to get the best results. I am going to make an effort to keep the pieces in each thread different until I definitely decide which one I am going to be keeping.
Criticism is welcome, even encouraged, so long as it is constructive. I would really like to get some opinions and feedback.
The first pieces that I'm going to post are actually older works, but they're pieces I either still enjoy or ones that I have done a bit of revamping on.
I named the thread after what tends to be a theme in my poems, duality. A lot of what I write has to do with fighting different sides of yourself, or having mixed feelings about something. Sometimes it's just about obsession, or it's short and meant to just express a momentary feeling.
I'm going to leave it at that for this first post, then begin by posting a piece in the second. I'll proably keep up posting by adding something every day or so in order to try and get a feel for the forum and rate of responses.
Gaian Grammar Guild
The Gaian Grammar Guild is a refuge for the literate, a place for them to post and read posts without worrying about the nonsensical ones.
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