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David/Julia story, spoilers for ep 42/43

Twisted Lady

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Posted: Thu Dec 13, 2007 11:14 pm

Well, I posted this on ff.n and didn't get any response to it, so I thought I'd ask for criticism here.

Since it's more of a...mature...themed story ( sweatdrop ) I'm just going to link it instead of posting it here.

Like it says in the title, spoilers if you haven't seen episodes 42 and 43.

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Posted: Sun Dec 16, 2007 8:51 am

I likes it.

I especially love the last line. "His heartrate seems to have skyrocketed a few minutes ago..."

It made me lulz a bit. But are you planning to continue the story?

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Twisted Lady

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Posted: Sun Dec 16, 2007 7:36 pm

I'm not sure. I'd have to find some time to write before I'd try to continue it. ninja

But thanks for the nice feedback.

Posted: Sun Dec 16, 2007 7:47 pm

Well find some time because I'm a David x Julia fan as well, and this is the only fan-fic I've seen for them.

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Twisted Lady

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Posted: Sun Dec 16, 2007 9:21 pm

Yeah, there's definitly a lack of fics for them. I have another one, it's in the fan corner of the forum. It's not as sexy as this one though.

Link to it.

Hopefully I'll have some time to work on more for them once I go on Christmas break.