Poetry

[Otulissa]

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Out There, Somewhere...

I want you to look for me,
even through the darkness.
I want you to stay with me by my side,
so that I know you won't let me go.
Seeing you will only make me think more,
about how I knew you were the right one.
It's hard to let go of you,
knowing that I've liked you for so long.
Your smile, your face, your personality,
it all reminds me of why I like you.
You're always near,
but I'm always out there,
Somewhere...

 

[Otulissa]

That's a sweet poem. A wonderful title too! Sometimes, my poems are so hard to name. XD I like the last line. I just picture a voice echoing it. It shows passion and emotion. I like the way you wrote the poem. ^_^ The split-up of the lines is practical, too.