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Sleepless and Alone

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 03, 2008 11:38 pm
Unable to sleep.
Feeling incomplete.
You may have walked away,
but in my heart, you still stay.

You left, saying you no longer
Could love me, you had to wander.
No one is with me; I wait now
Hoping I will have love, somehow.

Someone shoot between my eyes
I'm alone and my nights
Are sleepless and alone.
Tossing as I moan.

My nights are without peace.
Will solace ever come back to me?

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I can't really sleep. I've been alone and single for six months already, so that's what invoked the poem. I don't feel like dying; I have too much to live for. But I guess what I was trying to express was the death I feel inside. Does anyone else know this feeling? Any advice out there for me?  
PostPosted: Mon Aug 04, 2008 8:01 am
I am sorry, I cannot be of any help of this feeling. But I know of but one thing I have to say, and you have probably heard this many a time. It's better to have loved and lost then never to have loved at all.

Anyway, it's a great poem, and it sounded wonderful.  

Honeydukes Lover


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PostPosted: Tue Aug 05, 2008 1:20 pm
Bouncing Pigtails
I am sorry, I cannot be of any help of this feeling. But I know of but one thing I have to say, and you have probably heard this many a time. It's better to have loved and lost then never to have loved at all.

Anyway, it's a great poem, and it sounded wonderful.


-smiles- I have heard that indeed, and I suppose you're right. But I'm happy you liked the poem.  
PostPosted: Wed Aug 06, 2008 12:33 pm
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Bouncing Pigtails
I am sorry, I cannot be of any help of this feeling. But I know of but one thing I have to say, and you have probably heard this many a time. It's better to have loved and lost then never to have loved at all.

Anyway, it's a great poem, and it sounded wonderful.


-smiles- I have heard that indeed, and I suppose you're right. But I'm happy you liked the poem.


KNEW IT! I KNEW IT! xD

No problem! Liking good poems is just a thing with me. ⁿ3ⁿ  

Honeydukes Lover

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