yawnz...VOTE FOR ME IN DRAWING ARENA XD

[Ronzalpha201]

ForeverLenalee

Ronzalpha201

ForeverLenalee

LanceCalvis

Let's see I will start with the first drawing you made. The lines aren't bad and everything seems to be in order. At least up to the cleanup phase this is where you sort of dropped the ball so 4/5 for that. While your lines are well defined the shadows are a bit sketchy. It looks like you have good control but you are pressing too hard at random times.

Basics 4/5
Lines 4/5
Detail 3/5
Overall 6.66 (7)

Your second attempt was definitely better that your first. The base seems solid and the lines well defined. But the problem with this one is the top of the drawing is higher quality than the bottom. You have unneeded lines in certain places leading me to believe the cleanup phase wasn't executed properly in this one either.

Basic 4/5
Lines 5/5
Detail 4/4
Overall 8.66 (9)

uh... if u would plz read the descriptions on my pic, u would understand why it looks messy ><...

trust me, he's like that. still, a 9 is not bad. right?

the 7 >< the god forsaken 7 ><....

ehh, not comment there..  

[Rakiz]

Don't complain about the score you received. it was well meant criticism. learn from it and take it well. his grading was pretty accurate as well.

and if you're willing to submit something, you should be ready to take hits on what people think of it. and if it's not touched up? not everyone is going to look at it and sympathize. you can take care of issues like that in manual programs like paint, or more expensive ones like photoshop.

if you submit something, don't expect that everyone will grade more or less harshly based on what you give as reasoning why it doesn't look perfect.

~Rakiz~  

[trish_lucky07]

I voted already... 3nodding

good luck! ^ ^

 

[OakbingNoona]

Rakiz

Don't complain about the score you received. it was well meant criticism. learn from it and take it well. his grading was pretty accurate as well.

and if you're willing to submit something, you should be ready to take hits on what people think of it. and if it's not touched up? not everyone is going to look at it and sympathize. you can take care of issues like that in manual programs like paint, or more expensive ones like photoshop.

if you submit something, don't expect that everyone will grade more or less harshly based on what you give as reasoning why it doesn't look perfect.

~Rakiz~

yawnz... okay okay i get ur point... that was rather long and i got caught reading it when my boss was lurking around... stare anyways, thx for that, i really didn't mind it that much... just kinda acted like it :] ... i take criticism from my stupid boss everyday XD....  

[OakbingNoona]

yawnz yawnz... so how's everyone doing?  

[ZephrothTlngrd]

done voting. good job but i shudder at the lined paper. D: its horrible. overall though it was excelent work. good proportions and everything. good detail and pose. 10/10  

[OakbingNoona]

>< ya i know, it was a doodle but then it kinda looked nice and now i regret drawing it on line paper....