Running

[Maximilliardeau]

Where can I go to?
If even you keep me away
from with who I want to be
And I can't ask you to stay
and let you share my misery

To who can I go to?
If you aren't there
when I need you the most
It just isn't fair
if you keep yourself closed

Closed from the outside world
You keep on running
Running away from me
Drifting further from me
And all I can do is run after you.

And so you're leaving me alone.  

[afinaruri]

it's pretty good, although not your best, and it feels like it belongs somewhere else.  

[Dark Angel Videl]

I agree with afinaruri this poem would fit better in pain and rejection.
I love the poem it's kinda different like I useally read from you

Good work  

[Broken_Angel_xXx]

i thinks it's pretty good but honestly i dont get this, r u the one breaking up cuz ur suffering or is he leaving u cuz u r suffering?