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PostPosted: Sat Jul 26, 2008 6:50 am
this takes place at a point in the series further than the mangas are

Your name is omoshiroi akunohi and you live in a small, barely known village in the land of fire.

One day you were walking toward the leaf village like you often do and yo spotted some one looking at the village gate.You thought he looked familiar."Sasuke?"He turned toward you, looking confused.You were excited you hadn't seen him in years. As a child you wandered the leaf.You thought he was pretty cool so you spied on him. spying has always been your specialty. Since then you've heard a MILLION rumors.Then you looked at your watch and realized you shouldn't have gone wandering.You were going to be late.You didn't want to leave sasuke so you invited him to come."there's a party at my village want to come.He still looked confused, but shrugged and said"there's nothing else to do. Despite the tone of his voice he looked deep in thought.When you got there he sat on a low tree branch and stared out.You sighed. you knew his pain all too well.You didn't want to disturb him and walked on.You took a glance back and thought you saw him cry. cry You were soon greeted by your friend hari.
hari: hey omi!
you:hi
hari: why are you so glum?
You pointed to Sasuke sitting in the tree.You couldn't stop thinking about him. Every 5 minutes you checked on him. He ignored you every time.When it was over you found sasuke in the tree, asleep. you didn't want to leave him there so tried to wake him up.It didn't work.he started tossing violently and fell out of the tree. You dove and caught him.you were worried about him and couldn't find it in you to abandon him, so you carried him to your house and plopped him in the guest room bed. Knowing Sasuke he'd be gone by morning.
You were right, when you woke up he was gone. You went wandering again that day and spotted sasuke in the woods. He was writing something. Then he looked at it and was lost in thought once more. Out of no where he ripped it up and looked like he was holding back tears. He gave up his efforts to be strong and down they came. crying You knew exactly what was happening, you'd been through it yourself. You slipped on your backpack and headed out for a little investigation.You knew just what you needed to find. No one could stop you from helping sasuke.You thought to yourself "leaf village here I come"  
PostPosted: Sat Jul 26, 2008 6:53 am
just kinda an intro  

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 11, 2008 12:20 pm
It is pretty good so far. Writing it from the readers piont of view is very unique yet cool. Keep up the good work! whee  
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