.:Where's My Prince:.

[ThexHappyxHeartxBreak]

Take a bite from this poisonous apple, my pretty
You'll fall to the ground, what a shame, such a pity

When the clock strikes twelve you better run fast
Falling down, losing your slipper made of glass

Locked away in a dark tower- got nowhere to hide
Your long hair is cut away, I know you've cried

Fallen asleep for a whole lifetime to pass
Waiting for that one person, waiting for him at last

Will Prince Charming come to your side and give you a kiss?
Not this time, no, he dose not exist

This fairytale is starting to fade, it will never be real
Stop dreaming princess, its just too surreal

So lay down, my beauty, and remind yourself that you can't win this fight
So goodnight, farewell, and sleep tight

 

[lollipop_luvr9]

I loved all the Fairy Tales and the subject matter.
I wish it was longer.
The rhyme was good, but the last line was a stretch.
Good ideas you have!  

[Broken_Angel_xXx]

thats amazing! very very good! i just wrote a poem kinda like that, but it's very different yet the same in ways! keep up the good work u will go far!  

[Dark Angel Videl]

good work
the ending comes uncespected, that's what I like.
I like every single verse of it  

[mmhhnm]

that is really original 3nodding brilliant! 4laugh