Choices (Roads of a Leaf)

[Maximilliardeau]

I go one way
they forbade me
to go both ways...
you can't have the better
of both worlds
It's like
people tend to make
us
choose for something
not both,
so choices decide where
we
stop at the
end of the road.
But think about it....

... at the end
of every leaf,
it ends into emptiness.

Emptiness...
Same as death.

No matter what road you take, you'll always end up at the same place...
the end of the nerve, the end of your life...

... I think I will take the road with my eyes close.  

[lollipop_luvr9]

It is not my favorite. You had a good idea max! You can write it better, and I say this cause I know your writing!  

[GTTNG HGH N TH DWNLW]

I dig this completely. I love the thoughts it imposed upon myself.  

[Dark Angel Videl]

Never thaught about that...
I like this.
But I agree with lollipop, you can write it better.
It's not bad eather you still did a great job.