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Honeydukes Lover

PostPosted: Wed Aug 06, 2008 1:26 pm
I can't go around without seeing you.
I look at the door, there you are.
I can't go around without missing you.
I look and see you in my car.

I can't go around without loving you.
I don't know why I confess, but I do.
But you must feel it too.
Somewhere inside of you.

I'm not obsessed,
This is not paranoia.
But I need you.
Please, just give us another chance.

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How does it sound?  
PostPosted: Sun Aug 10, 2008 5:17 pm
This poem sounds lovely, and it shows the emotions of needing someone rather well.  

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Honeydukes Lover

PostPosted: Tue Aug 12, 2008 4:47 pm
Thanks.  
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