What if... *Spoilers*

[VanillaSugar11]

A lot of people say that they don't like the way BD ended, with Jacob and Renesmee and all that. So here you can talk about what happened - it's so confusing - and what you wish happened. Like, your own fanfiction version of BD. Yeah. For example, I wish Edward became a human. I know, impossible. But a girl can dream, right? Or you can talk about what happened. Talk abuot Irina. I dunno, DISCUSS. biggrin  

[Queen-of-the-Rogue]

It had an ok ending but I kinda wish we could have seen some more Edward and Nessie interactions as she's his daughter but Jacob kept getting in the way. I love Jake and all but I personally felt that Edward should have spent more time with his daughter in the book. But that's just me.  

[Tea Room Terror]

I like the way that the book ended. Jake and Nessie are one of my favorite pairings. I do wish that we had learned more about their relationship though.

Also about the fight in the clearing, I kind of wish there was a bit more action.

Other than that, a great finale. :]  

[Glitterbean]

Like many people, I believe the book spent way too much time building up to a huge climax and then fell flat. However, I don't know what Stephenie could have written instead. She couldn't have killed all the Cullens, because that would have been a horrible ending, too. There's no easy solution to this one, I guess.

I agree with you, Queen-of-the-Rogue. We've seen Edward as a boyfriend, husband, brother, and son, but what is he like as a father? It didn't seem like there was any real connection between him and Nessie.

Also, I HATE how Charlie and Sue wound up together. In my opinion, Stephenie was trying way too hard to make everything wrap up nice and neat. Plus if you do the math, Harry Clearwater died less than a year ago and already his wife is getting together with his best friend? What gives?