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Quick one shot poem^^

21LV3Rgirl

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Posted: Tue Feb 17, 2009 8:46 pm

THIS IS A POEM I FOUND MYSELF ATTACHED TO LATELY^^

It's truly not mine and I hope the author doesn't mind me sharing it with other people

(well i already said It's NOT mine so I'm guessing its fine^^)

HERE IT IS

IF I WERE PART OF YOU, I'D BE YOUR TEARS.
TO BE CONCEIVED BY YOUR HEART
BORN IN YOUR EYES
LIVE ON YOUR CHEEKS
AND DIE ON YOUR LIPS

Posted: Tue Feb 17, 2009 8:48 pm

ANYONE WHO LIKES THIS SHORT POEM can comment it
And to commemorate its beauty you can remake one of your own^^(my idea)
START BY TIPPING

IF I WERE PART OF YOU, I'd BE__________
TO BE________ By your__________
Born in your_________
Live on your_____________
AND _________(die?) on your________

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Geek Zombie

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Posted: Wed Feb 18, 2009 5:05 am

IF I WERE PART OF YOU, I'd BE your feet
TO BE your support By your will
Born in your dreams
Live in your heart
AND die on your lips.

not really good one but wanted to post hehe

Posted: Wed Feb 18, 2009 8:07 am

nice nice

IF I WERE PART OF YOU, I'd BE your eyes.
TO BE loved By your heart
Born in your arms
Live on your couch...
AND yes die(die?) on your...uuhm...bed? floor? xd not...

You already took the best words 3nodding

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spottystripes

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Posted: Thu Feb 19, 2009 5:34 pm

IF I WERE PART OF YOU, I'd BE your heart
TO BE loved by you By your warmth
Born in your dreams
Live in your blood
AND die on your lips.

cool peom though -- i like the last line -- on your lips ---

not the die part cuz thats the end innit -- unless you die together while u were kissing and then met in the life after death - hehe! blaugh

Posted: Thu Feb 19, 2009 9:06 pm

heyyy!!! great guys!! I'm really happy dat I'm receiving comments on this thread^^
keep it up!

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