Writing Help

[Pup in Fluff]

I am working on my novel currently and I realized that people might need help with something involving what they're writing. This is a place where you can come in and ask for help finding the right rhyme for your poem, the perfect decribing word for your story, the emotion that describes your feelings in your role play, and so on. I know there are a lot of places on the internet where you could just as easily find that stuff but it would be nicer to know exactly where to go for any information you might need. If you need anything, the appropriate beginning or ending, the spelling of a word, the proper word for something, ANYTHING, just ask for it here. Because everyone needs something sometimes.  

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Thank God I need major help... Thanks Pup you came in right in time! ~.~


So I'm writing a novel, and it's called Half Empty... It's about this girl who's twin sister gets hit by a car and dies. She falls in love with this guy named Jakob. Her father becomes an alcoholic and abuses her. She gets super depressed and starts cutting herself. And to top it all off her sister's (ex, I guess cos she's dead...) boyfriend rapes her after school one day. I don't know if this is just way too much information, like too much is happening... So I need help. Help me?  

[Pup in Fluff]

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Thank God I need major help... Thanks Pup you came in right in time! ~.~


So I'm writing a novel, and it's called Half Empty... It's about this girl who's twin sister gets hit by a car and dies. She falls in love with this guy named Jakob. Her father becomes an alcoholic and abuses her. She gets super depressed and starts cutting herself. And to top it all off her sister's (ex, I guess cos she's dead...) boyfriend rapes her after school one day. I don't know if this is just way too much information, like too much is happening... So I need help. Help me?

what I would suggest is taking things slow. Her sister gets hit by the car and doesn't die right away. She goes to visit her sister in the hospital every day and, the one day that she can't visit her, her sister dies. That should lead up to her meeting Jakob and her father becoming an alcoholic. Because of him abusing her, she gets depressed. Then slow it down more. Make things get better and make it seem like things can't get any worse THEN have him rape her. It's definately not too much if you do it just right.  

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Pup in Fluff

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Thank God I need major help... Thanks Pup you came in right in time! ~.~


So I'm writing a novel, and it's called Half Empty... It's about this girl who's twin sister gets hit by a car and dies. She falls in love with this guy named Jakob. Her father becomes an alcoholic and abuses her. She gets super depressed and starts cutting herself. And to top it all off her sister's (ex, I guess cos she's dead...) boyfriend rapes her after school one day. I don't know if this is just way too much information, like too much is happening... So I need help. Help me?

what I would suggest is taking things slow. Her sister gets hit by the car and doesn't die right away. She goes to visit her sister in the hospital every day and, the one day that she can't visit her, her sister dies. That should lead up to her meeting Jakob and her father becoming an alcoholic. Because of him abusing her, she gets depressed. Then slow it down more. Make things get better and make it seem like things can't get any worse THEN have him rape her. It's definately not too much if you do it just right.

But see I have the death all planed out... I'm just wondering if it's all too much for one book.... Yeah, I think he's going to rape her towards the end.  

[Pup in Fluff]

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Pup in Fluff

explode555

Thank God I need major help... Thanks Pup you came in right in time! ~.~


So I'm writing a novel, and it's called Half Empty... It's about this girl who's twin sister gets hit by a car and dies. She falls in love with this guy named Jakob. Her father becomes an alcoholic and abuses her. She gets super depressed and starts cutting herself. And to top it all off her sister's (ex, I guess cos she's dead...) boyfriend rapes her after school one day. I don't know if this is just way too much information, like too much is happening... So I need help. Help me?

what I would suggest is taking things slow. Her sister gets hit by the car and doesn't die right away. She goes to visit her sister in the hospital every day and, the one day that she can't visit her, her sister dies. That should lead up to her meeting Jakob and her father becoming an alcoholic. Because of him abusing her, she gets depressed. Then slow it down more. Make things get better and make it seem like things can't get any worse THEN have him rape her. It's definately not too much if you do it just right.

But see I have the death all planed out... I'm just wondering if it's all too much for one book.... Yeah, I think he's going to rape her towards the end.

No...it's not too much. Of course, if you don't feel comfortable putting that much in a book, it might be a good idea to cut it in half and make a sequel...  

[Cerebus05]

Yay! This is good, because I'm always getting writer blocks. (minus my grammar and spelling mistakes) sweatdrop  

[Pup in Fluff]

Cerebus05

Yay! This is good, because I'm always getting writer blocks. (minus my grammar and spelling mistakes) sweatdrop

Writers blocks...a good cure for them is to listen to music. Also, I like to look at pictures of roses. Even go to google images and type in "Abstract" those pictures always give me some sort of ideas.