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Mrs Gey
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 30, 2009 9:05 am


Name: Connera Hummings

Age: just turned 18

Occupation: Student

Personality: She's cold and distant when she doesn't like someone. But knows how to joke around and be fun when she feels like it. She's very angry and heartbroken since her mother died and feels she has no need to live, but can't take her own life, no matter how hard she tries. She cuts her wrists to feel the pain, to make sure she's still alive, even though she doesn't want to be.

Past: Her mother died just months before she turned 17. On her 17th birthday, her father beat her and she was left for dead. Police got a call and came to find her on the kitchen floor, almost dead. When she woke up, she screamed and yelled and asked why they brought her back. She's "special" now, because of the NDE(Near Death Experience). Without the support of her mother now, she's unstable.

Intrests: She like drawing and is very good at it. She also enjoy painting, but doesn't get to do it often. She liks the rain and will stand and dance in it for hours, she never gets sick so she does it ofter. The thing she likes the most are lightning storms. The lightning makes her feel alive, the only thing that mkes her feel powerful. She also likes listening to music, like Kerli, Thre Days Grace, Linkin Park, 30 Minutes To Mars, and more.

Birthday: October 20th, 1990

Date: October 30th, 2008
PostPosted: Mon Mar 30, 2009 9:09 am


Devil's Dance [1] Not Telling

Three loud chimes of the school bell rung, telling me I was late. I ran down the hallway and into the classroom, skidding to a stop, interrupting Mrs. Cetching in the middle of her lesson.

"I'm here!" I exclaim, slamming my stuff onto my desk.

Some people snickered, others huffed with annoyance.

"Good for you Miss Connera, now sit down. Mrs.Cetching growled, half amused, half annoyed.

"It's Conner, Conner Hummings" I growl, sitting down noisily.

After 50 minutes of stuff we'll never use, the bell rings again, signalling the end of class.

"Connera, Stay" Mrs.Cetching barks as everyone shuffles out, some turning back to give me sympathetic looks.

"It's Conner" I remark.

"Connera, I know your mother just died months ago, and your still upset, but could you atleast make an effort?" She asks in a motherly tone.

"What do you know" I exclaim whilst storming out of the room, to my next class. Art.

The bells rings just as I enter the room.

"Miss Hummings, take a seat" Mr.Black says gently. Everyone loves him because he lets you talk and joke around, as long as you get your work done.

Just as I sit and Mr.Black gets to talking, a soft knocking at the door stops him. People starting talking and joking about as Mr.Black walks into the hall. I gaze out through the window next to me. I get a table all to myself, that I'm grateful for. Mr.Black comes back into the room and gestures for someone to follow. I turn my head fully away and grabbed my sketch pad from my pile of books.

The chair next to me scraps against the floor, my eyes close in annoyance.
I come back to the classroom from my own little world, called my mind.I hear everyone whispering and the Powder Puffs giggling and whispering. I stare straight ahead, my pencil hovering over my pad of paper.

"My name's Thoren" A deep voice says besaie me. I don't even blink.

"Today class, I'd like you to draw a 3D, realistic object you see in this room" Mr.Black says, smiling.

Everyone starts getting their drawing pads out and talking with nearby friends.

My eyes sweep over everything in his room, nothing catching my attention, until my eyes stop on a display case Mr.Black has. In the display case it has an Egyptian art scroll. On the scroll was Egyptian words, symbols and a painting of a cat. My hand flies across the paper, drawing every detail of the scroll.

The bell chimed just as I finished.

"You're very artistic" the voice of Thoren breathes next to me. I shiver against my will.

"You're very annoying" I counter, turning on my heel, towards the door.
A hand cold as ice grabs my own, making all my stuff scatter across the floor. I turn to glare at him, which I do, of course, after my heart skips a beat. His chocolatey brown hair is messy, as though he just got out of bed. His bright green eyes don't see to go with his hair, but he's able to pull it off perfectly. Dark circles are under his eyes and he looked tired. His skin was pale, like my own, and he made it look marvelous.

I whip away from him and crouch down to get my stuff. Before I can pick up my last book, a pale hand shoots out and grabs it.

Thoren smirks at me, I glare hatefully back.

"Give it back" I growl, my hand out, palm up. My wrist band covers what I hide on my wrist.

He hold it above his head and I lead for it before he can move, I take it from him.

"What's your name" he asks as I turn away, with all my stuff.

I stop and look over my shoulder at him, smirking.

"Not telling"

Mrs Gey
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Mrs Gey
Captain

PostPosted: Mon Mar 30, 2009 9:14 am


Devil's Dance [2] Very Smexy

*Thoren*



Her scent was unbelievable. The moment I walked into the room, all I could do was try not kill her. And then I was seated next to her!

But now as she lept for the book in my hand, I couldn't help inhale her scent. So wonderful and delightful. My throat burned and I wanted nothing but to bite her, drain her dry. But she backed away, book in hand, and was almost out the door.

"What's your name" I call after her. She stops and turns her head to look at me. She smirks.

"Not telling" She calls bak to me and leaves. It's lunch now and the cold day of October is dry and colorful. Perfect for Halloween tomorrow. I grab my stuf and walk to my locker. Gettin to it, I unlock the lock and open my locker. I put my stuff inside and notice that girl sitting with three guys. All laughing. Except her. She's watching me and our eyes meet. She doesn't look away like the other girls do. I make my way over to her table, keeping eye contact with her. I'm surprised she hasn't blinked yet. The three guys look up as I approach.

"Are these three bugging you" I ask smoothly.

She doesn't respond, instead gets up and leaves the cafeteria.


~Conner~



I can't believe the nerve of that guy! I don't know him and he doesn't know me! I reach the bathroom and kick out the two girls in there. I take off my wrist and and finger the scars and fresh scabs on there. I reach into my pocket andtake out the small pocket knife I have.

It opens with a small click. I bite my lip as I press it against my wrist, running it across the smooth, soft skin. Blood drips off into the sink. I cut multiple times. more and more blood falls into the sink. Finally the knife drops from my hand into the sink. I get some paper towel and press it to the fresh wounds, then I put my wrist band back on, so it looks like nothing happened. I clean off my knife and set it back in my pocket.

I leave and go back to the cafeterai. Thoren is still at my table. I sigh in annoyance and start to walk to my table. He looks up as though he hears me coming. I sit down and ignore him.

"So, what's your name" He asks again. I sigh again. He'll keep bugging me, I know it.

"Conner Hummings" I murmur, almost sure he didn't hear me. He did.

"Conner?" He cocks his head to the side like a confused puppy. Kinda cute.

"Connera, but I like Conner" I say, looking him in the eye.

He reaches out suddenly and I flinch away. His thumb traces my jaw and his fingers trail through my hair. I almost blush.

"You're very pretty Connera, you know that, don't you?" He says in almost a whisper. Some people have stopped eating or talking, to stare in disbelief. Just as suddenly as he moved, he retracted.

"What are you being for Halloween" He ask out of the blue, changing the atmosphere instantly.

It takes me a few seconds to answer, "Umm, I think I'm going to be a cat" I stutter.

"Oh, a cat? Very smexy" Now I blush.

"Cat's aren't that sexy" I mumble, my face burning.

"Yes they are.I think cats are the most sexy of animals. Especially if you dress up as one" he says seductively.

"Yeah, whatever" I laugh, face still on fire.

"Are you going to the Halloween Dance tomorrow Conner?" he asks, leaning over the table as though to get closer to me.

"Umm, yeah, maybe" I respond, pulling my fingers through my hair.I now notice there's no food in front of him. "Not hungry?" I question, eyeing the place where a tray of food should be.

"Nah, I had a big breakfast, and I'm saving room for dinner tonight" He smiles and chuckles as though he were laughing at some inside joke.

"Inside joke" I ask, eyeing him.

"Very inside joke" He says, flashing another smile.
PostPosted: Mon Mar 30, 2009 9:26 am


Devil's Dance [3] What, are you stalking me now?!

"Are you going to the Halloween Dance tomorrow Conner?" he asks, leaning over the table as though to get closer to me.

"Umm, yeah, maybe" I respond, pulling my fingers through my hair. I now notice there's no food in front of him. "Not hungry?" I question, eyeing the place where a tray of food should be.

"Nah, I had a big breakfast, and I'm saving room for dinner tonight" He smiles and chuckles as though he were laughing at some inside joke.

"Inside joke" I ask, eyeing him.

"Very inside joke" He says, flashing another smile.

"Well have fun." I smirk and get up, dragging my bag after me and walking out of the cafeteria. He didn't move to follow me or stop me, just watched me leave.


-Thoren-



I watched her leave. Suddenly a small group of girls approached me, flashing, what I think was supposed to be, flirtatious smiles.

"Hello, you must be Thoren," the lead girl purred, sitting next to be. The other girls behind her fluttered into the seats next to me.

"Yeah, I have a question. Where does Connera go?" I asked, ignoring her attempts.

"Oh, she goes home or something, she usually says she has to go see her mother, but whatever. It's not like her mother doesn't live with her or something." The girl sneered.

"Catherine, lunch is almost over" One of her followers said quietly, getting up and steering herself away from my table. I got up and walked out of the cafe, searching for Connera's wonderful and whispery scent.

"What, are you stalking me now or something?" Her voice remarked sarcastically from behind me.

"No. But I was curious as to where you're going" I said, turning slowly, as to not to scare her.

"Well, ever hear of curiosity killed the cat?"

"Yes, good thing I'm not a cat then," I smirked at her. She frowned and turned back to her locker.

"So, where are you going?" I asked, walking smoothly to her side.

"To visit my mum." She said, turning around, not expecting me to be so close. She pressed her back to the lockers, to make the distance between us at least a little bit bigger. It didn't help at all. I took a step back, barely. She turned back to her locker without another word, her face flushed.

"You smell lovely" I said, taking a step foward, closing the distance between us, her back pressed against my front.

"What do I smell like" She breathed, turning her head a bit to look at me.

"Roses, and vanilla." I said easily, breathing in her uniquely scented hair.

"Could just be my shampoo" She muttered, shivering. I stepped away from her and was at the other side of the hall before she could even turn around to look at me. Her eyes were wide and her heart fluttered.

"Nah. I don't think so. There's no shampoo that smells that good. Well, good day, Conner. I'll see you tomorrow morning darling" I walked quickly away, tucking away the beast that had surfaced at her scent. I suddenly turned around and slammed my fist into the outside school wall, it crumbled and shook with the impact, small chunks falling to the ground. I looked around surprised, when had I gotten outside? The cool, misty air calmed down my acute senses, my head completely cleared of Connera's scent and the sudden urge to kill her. I could break her like a stick. She was so fragile and human.

-Conner-


My heart still fluttered whenever I heard the slightest of sounds. Thoren was fast. He was strong. And he was attracted to my scent. I pulled a lock of hair up to my nose and breathed in. I could only smell vanilla, no roses.

I walk slowly out of the school and breathe in the cool, misty scented air. Then I stop in my tracks. In the side of school, small chunks of the building lay on the moist ground. I walk past it, inspecting it as I walked past.

I walked quickly across the street, swearing loudy as someone sped past me, nearly hitting me. The only thing that stopped it from hitting me was a pair of strong arms that moved me out the way quickly. I turned to thank them, but the words got stuck in my throat.

Instead I snapped: "Oh, it's you," and walked away, leaving Thoren to follow me like a lost puppy.

"I just saved you and I don't get any 'Thank you Thoren, your my hero'?"

"Would you like one?" I asked, turning toward him, walking backwards.

"Yes" He snapped.

"Tough" I smirked and turned around, walking quicker.

"That's not nice" He whined, keeping pace with me easily. That shouldn't annoy me, but it did, I walked a bit faster. He kept pace.

"Whoever said I was nice lied to you hun. It's time to face the cruel truth, I'm not a nice person" I remarked, glaring at him.

"Oh, you just seemed like a nice person." He said, wrapping an arm around my middle as a small group of girls walked past. They shot me glares of jealousy and hatred. I plucked myself from Thoren's grip and walked three feet away from him.

"Don't touch me, kay? Just becuase you need someone to hold you hand and show you the cruel world and tell you it's not like your little wonderland, doesn't mean I'm that person." I snapped, storming off. Almost there. I saw the graveyard just a few yards away.

I looked behind me for Thoren, but he wasn't behind me anymore. My heart jolted and the hairs on the back of my neck stood up. I turned around, back toward the graveyard and took off, kneeling at a grave quickly.

"Yeah mom" I spoke a little over a whisper. The wind blew lightly, seeming to answer me. I smiled.

"You always had some way to communicate. So, how's heaven? Life is good, I'm still getting B's and A's in school, mostly A's. A new guy, Thoren, bugs the heck out of me. He seems nice enough, but there's something about him. It sends shivers down my spine whenever I touch him, which I try not to do. Touch him I mean. You know what would happen. I wish you were still here with me, it'd be a lot easier, dealing with everything going on" I trailed off, the wind played with my hair, seeming to try to comfort me. I rubbed my wet face and laughed roughly.

"I don't even know why I even cry still" I mumbled, laying my hand on the cold stone. I sat there for a good five hours, and when I finally did get up, I was cramped up and hungry. The stars shined dimly in the dusk light. I set off, settling my bag more comfortably on my shoulder.

My eyes flickered to every movement. My heart pounded in my ears.

"You shouldn't be out in the dark" A dark, seductive voice growled, I jumped and spun to look at the figure sitting idly on a nearby bench. His blue eyes seemed peircing.

"You shouldn't talk to little girls, they might tell the police" I remarked, walking away.

Without hearing his footsteps, he was suddenly walking beside me.

"What little girl?" He asked, seemingly casual.

"Get away from me or I'll go to the police and tell them that your stalking me" I hissed, turning on him.

"You wouldn't do that. I wouldn't be around for it, and theres no way you'd be able to drag me there, little girl" He mocked, stalked forward.

"Christopher, get away from her" A new, fimilar voice cut in, I realized I had backed away from "Christopher" a few steps.

"Thoren! Are you stalking me now" I yelled, storming up to punch him. Instead of hurting him, I hurt myself, but I didn't show it.

"No, I'm walking around." He defended himself, his eyes smoldering my own.

I turned away frm his hard gaze and walked off, none of them following. Finally making it to my small house, I let myself in and sighed deeply.

The next day I was sleepy and groggy, storming loudly to my bathroom. I remembered today was the halloween dance. The whole highschool had a half day today, to get ready for the dance. I got dressed normally and put on little make-up, like usual. A little eyeliner and lipgloss. I looked at my wrist and smirked, the scars and wounds that were there yesterday, weren't there. Cool thing is, I heal really fast. All scars or wounds heal and disappear when my own blood is on them.

I walked to school and made it just before the first bell rang loudly. The whole day blurred past, everyone excited about the nearby dance. Teachers gave no homework and were happy about getting out of school sooner, they had lives too, surprisingly.

Mrs Gey
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B3autiful_trag3dy
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 13, 2009 12:32 pm


ahh i like this one too!! haha Your very good at writing ya know that?
PostPosted: Mon Jul 13, 2009 8:45 pm


BlueBby548
ahh i like this one too!! haha Your very good at writing ya know that?


You only say that because we're friends Em.

Mrs Gey
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B3autiful_trag3dy
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 19, 2009 6:41 pm


Mrs Gey
BlueBby548
ahh i like this one too!! haha Your very good at writing ya know that?


You only say that because we're friends Em.

oh that's not true.. your very very good. I can be brutally honest when need be. And i'm being honest when i say your one of the best writers on here.
PostPosted: Mon Aug 03, 2009 8:35 pm


BlueBby548
Mrs Gey
BlueBby548
ahh i like this one too!! haha Your very good at writing ya know that?


You only say that because we're friends Em.

oh that's not true.. your very very good. I can be brutally honest when need be. And i'm being honest when i say your one of the best writers on here.

What about me, Em? T^T

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B3autiful_trag3dy
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 15, 2009 9:08 am


I think you are good too, you need to stop being so hard on yourself, you're a good writer.
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