Poisonous Kisses

[Saline Everwood]

This has been deleated. I want to work on it some more. I might put it back up.  

[Mrs Gey]

Well, you were right. There's definitely multiple mistakes. Grammar, and spelling.
But I want to read more of this story. You've got me hooked! I wanna find out who Gera and Takira really are. They seem like they have something to hide.
Oh! I'm also writing a book! It's a werewolf story, the oneI posted on here, Blue Moons Call, only it's all fixed up. Most of the errors are gone.  

[Mrs Gey]

Only problem I have with it, thatI didn't already post, is that I get confused when you change the Point of View. You need to post, at the top of each change, who's point of view it is. Makes it a whole lot easier to read.  

[Saline Everwood]

Mrs Gey

Only problem I have with it, thatI didn't already post, is that I get confused when you change the Point of View. You need to post, at the top of each change, who's point of view it is. Makes it a whole lot easier to read.

I shall do that.