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I saw her

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rolejunkie42

PostPosted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 3:02 pm
This here is the only poem that i have ever written. i sent it into the Arena ages ago and it got a good score. I decided to post it here just to reintroduce it to people. And to show why i never write poetry.
P.S. the thing at the bottom is the description.

I saw her today.

Again i saw her in the crowds of people who pass without care.
Again i saw her with her sweet smile, when all i could see was sorrow and depression.
I could see her glowing color brighten the room around her.
I could see her eyes glisten, her hair shine.
I could see her reaching for me, reaching for my hand.
I know not who she is, nor her name.
But i know her all the same.
She is my one and only.
She is the one thing that would complete my life.
I reach for her..... But as our hands meet she disappears again.
I do not feel saddened though.
I can only feel the joy she brings me with each sighting.
I saw her today, and today i feel more alive than ever before.




i get this strange vision in my head of a woman sometimes. i always see her whenever i feel stressed but when i see her, i see the same stress in her. I want to meet her but i don't know who she is. this is how each sighting goes essentially.  
PostPosted: Sun Jun 21, 2009 9:10 am
Woah, that was good, and it's a tad weird with the vision thing... But good poem!  

Mrs Gey
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