All for you my love

[Shadow(AoD)]

All for you my love

Well I've walked a million miles, to find you
I've climbed the mountains to see you

I've searched the seas to catch you
I've ran the sands of time to hear you

To find out just who you are, who you are
I've been traveling along time, way to far

To turn back now, I've gotten so close to you
I've gotten so close, I just gotta love you

Love you to death and everything in between
Our love is like none other they've seen

We will withstand all in gods hands to be one
We will survive all of the deeds that has come

I will do all that I can for you my sweet gal
I'll take the head of your ex with a 50. cal.

If thats what it takes to keep you alive
I'd do it, I'd have to, I need to strive

Let us be, let us go, let us show our love
Our love that has been a gift from above

That has last us a lifetime of sarrow to overcome
Together we share our pasts, no more are we numb

We share our lives now intertwined by fate
Our destiny will not be the one to come late

So we live now, we live the here and now
We're together forever, and it's just as how

I said, I promised it'd be, it is the way it is
Now we live this life the way we do in bliss

Now I have to end it here, something we all will miss
Kind of like the soft sweet sensation of our loves kiss



Well this is one of my newest poems so far. This one is dedicated to my beloved, Trista. Please do let me know how you all like it or dislike it. Thank you. Heaven is love. Peace.  

[Dark Angel Videl]

I like it! There is alot of love in this poem.
I also like the way you put in mountains and seas to give it a higher meaning. I like the poem but i don't like the title, it sounds very common and the poem is not. Hmm but I don't know a better title eather.

Goos work and keep on writing  

[KittySongLUVsJONASBoys]

That's Pretty Good 3nodding
I like how you were able to make it rhythm, that's pretty hard for some to do
Keep it up