I didn't like how she got the 'teenage romance' thing. Espeically how Hermione was depicted or how Harry was always 'beast' around Ginny.
The latter part of it is mostly because I don't like how Harry and Ginny got to gether (doesn't like that ship at all.) Though it was completely made up for nearing the end because they both know what the real deal was.
I liked it over all. It wasn't rushed. (Except for the part of whatever 'relationships' the main character's were suppose to have. But I can over look it.)
Everything else was great really.
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