Dead's Watcher

[damaged-reality]

Dead’s Watcher

Why don’t you look at me?
With your glazed eye, so wild and free.
Why do your arms flail so much?
As if to grab something out of touch.
Why do you hunger for the flesh of mine?
Is your torment too strong; too painful; too divine?
Why is your skin so pale and dead?
Is the sting too much to bare or shed?
Why don’t you strive for the light?
Your body is trapped in this endless night.
And why do they hold you from the sea?
Is it because you’re a zombie for eternity?  

[Dark Angel Videl]

I didn't know it was about a zombie untill the end.
The end fits so good in this poem. The rhymong is also very good but it's the last line that I like the most. That makes the poem complete.

Good work mrgreen  

[damaged-reality]

Dark Angel Videl

I didn't know it was about a zombie untill the end.
The end fits so good in this poem. The rhymong is also very good but it's the last line that I like the most. That makes the poem complete.

Good work mrgreen

Thank you! (I havn't had the best day today sad , and you just made me feel happy!)  

[damaged-reality]

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