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PostPosted: Sun Sep 13, 2009 2:43 pm
Its for my spnaish class. were working on the conjungation of e < i and o < u

Senti triste, ayer
Asistimos una fiesta, ella sugirio
yo hable si
durante un fiesta, un muchacho venio
carlos sonrio y pidio para atencion
ella rio y ando exterior
carlos seio
ella murio noche

I know im missing ascents, but i have no idea how to put them.

Please tell me what i just said, (in English), so I can see if it realates to the story in my head  
PostPosted: Sun Sep 13, 2009 2:44 pm
whee  

berry-sweet-promise

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 13, 2009 2:46 pm
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 13, 2009 5:09 pm
berry-sweet-promise
Its for my spnaish class. were working on the conjungation of e < i and o < u

Senti triste, ayer
Asistimos una fiesta, ella sugirio
yo hable si
durante un fiesta, un muchacho venio
carlos sonrio y pidio para atencion
ella rio y ando exterior
carlos seio
ella murio noche

I know im missing ascents, but i have no idea how to put them.

Please tell me what i just said, (in English), so I can see if it realates to the story in my head


"Me senti triste ayer. Asistimos a una fiesta que ella sugerio. (Yo hable asi???) Durante la fiesta, un muchacha vino. Carlos sonrio y pidio la atencion. Ella se rio y anduvo afuera. (Carlos seio?) Ella fallecio anoche."

Well from what I can translate...
(Becuz its kind of messy in spanish)

"I felt sad yesterday. We assisted a party that she suggested. (I spoke like that???) During the party, a girl came. Carlos smiled and asked for the attention. She laughed and walked outside. (Carlos???) She died last night."  

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 13, 2009 5:10 pm
berry-sweet-promise
Its for my spnaish class. were working on the conjungation of e < i and o < u

Senti triste, ayer
Asistimos una fiesta, ella sugirio
yo hable si
durante un fiesta, un muchacho venio
carlos sonrio y pidio para atencion
ella rio y ando exterior
carlos seio
ella murio noche

I know im missing ascents, but i have no idea how to put them.

Please tell me what i just said, (in English), so I can see if it realates to the story in my head


Me senti triste, ayer
Asistimos a una fiesta, ella lo sugirió
yo dije si durante un fiesta, un muchacho viniera
carlos sonrió y pidió que pusieramos atención
ella rió y caminó al exterior
carlos se rió
ella murió esa noche

I was sad yestery, we went to a feast which she suggested.
I told...If a boy arrived...
Carlos smiled and asked attention
She laughed and walked outside
Carlos laughed
She died that night  
PostPosted: Mon Sep 14, 2009 8:23 pm
Mitzar
berry-sweet-promise
Its for my spnaish class. were working on the conjungation of e < i and o < u

Senti triste, ayer
Asistimos una fiesta, ella sugirio
yo hable si
durante un fiesta, un muchacho venio
carlos sonrio y pidio para atencion
ella rio y ando exterior
carlos seio
ella murio noche

I know im missing ascents, but i have no idea how to put them.

Please tell me what i just said, (in English), so I can see if it realates to the story in my head


Me senti triste, ayer
Asistimos a una fiesta, ella lo sugirió
yo dije si durante un fiesta, un muchacho viniera
carlos sonrió y pidió que pusieramos atención
ella rió y caminó al exterior
carlos se rió
ella murió esa noche

I was sad yestery, we went to a feast which she suggested.
I told...If a boy arrived...
Carlos smiled and asked attention
She laughed and walked outside
Carlos laughed
She died that night


<.< Fiesta=Party  

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 15, 2009 6:12 am
Tiara_Estella


<.< Fiesta=Party


gracias por explicarle Tiara.

fiesta = feast, entertainnement, party, festival, public rejoicing (copiado del diccionario)

Yo utilice feast como una palabra mas general para traducir "fiesta", y tambien habria podido utiizar party

No lo hice (usar party para traducir fiesta) justamente para darle un sentido mas amplio /ambiguo a nuestra "fiesta".

party, la palabra inglesa, no es una palabra reconocida por el diccionario de la Real Academia de la lengua, sin embargo la mayoria de hispano parlantes no solo saben /entienden el significado sino que es comunmente utilizada para hablar de pequeñas fiestas/reuniones de caracter mas intimo o reducido.  
PostPosted: Wed Sep 16, 2009 10:06 am
Mitzar
Tiara_Estella


<.< Fiesta=Party


gracias por explicarle Tiara.

fiesta = feast, entertainnement, party, festival, public rejoicing (copiado del diccionario)

Yo utilice feast como una palabra mas general para traducir "fiesta", y tambien habria podido utiizar party

No lo hice (usar party para traducir fiesta) justamente para darle un sentido mas amplio /ambiguo a nuestra "fiesta".

party, la palabra inglesa, no es una palabra reconocida por el diccionario de la Real Academia de la lengua, sin embargo la mayoria de hispano parlantes no solo saben /entienden el significado sino que es comunmente utilizada para hablar de pequeñas fiestas/reuniones de caracter mas intimo o reducido.

Uh yeah. What Mitzar said...
lol
I go by what I learned not by dictionaries xD
10 years on a spanish speaking Island teaches a lot.
Plus spanish speaking parents...So yea...  

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PostPosted: Fri Oct 23, 2009 11:44 pm
Tiara_Estella

Uh yeah. What Mitzar said...
lol
I go by what I learned not by dictionaries xD
10 years on a spanish speaking Island teaches a lot.
Plus spanish speaking parents...So yea...

estoy celosa. me encantaría si mis padres hablaran español. heart  
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