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Celeste_Nightshade

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PostPosted: Tue Dec 08, 2009 5:30 pm
I wrote this back in like feb or march of 2007..What do you think?

Her Guardian Angel

A girl alone in her room,
Watching the sharp blade of glass
slip from her bloody grasp.
tinted red...
'No one notices, no one cares.'
she says out loud, believing it
as the river of red flows from her wrists...
Soaking into her bed.
'no one cares' she says aloud again.
Only to be answered by another voice heard in the darkness...
'I care' says the voice...
'I've always cared'....

She opens her eyes to find
herself lying in the hospital
with someone sitting next to her
holding her hand.
Staring into her face
Waiting for her to wake up.

She opens her eyes
And looks upon the face of her angel....
She looks into his clear sapphire eyes,
feeling things she never thought possible...
the she would never feel......

She felt love in his eyes,
a new self-worth.
She knew...finally,
that someone cared...
Always had and always will
 
PostPosted: Tue Dec 08, 2009 6:16 pm
lack of verse rhythm, but the message is very deep, very soft, warming to the heart, and lovely. Good work =D  

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Celeste_Nightshade

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PostPosted: Wed Dec 09, 2009 1:34 pm
^^ Thanks, yeah I went with Free verse with this one...it was something that popped into my head.

I am thinking of putting up my darker ones....think I should?  
PostPosted: Wed Dec 09, 2009 1:37 pm
Sure. I gota put up one of mine too ninja The logbook still favors you.  

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Celeste_Nightshade

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PostPosted: Wed Dec 09, 2009 5:50 pm
^///^ heart I am doing my best to keep it up! 4laugh  
PostPosted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 5:17 pm
I likes your two guyses poems. 3nodding imma read em all and leave a nice little comment because if I made poems I would want people to comment too.  

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