Untitled by Celeste

[Celeste_Nightshade]

This is a darker one I wrote...I WAS REALLY pissed off...a chick tried to pick a fight with me...she was like a 9th grader and I was a senior at the time...lol

Everyone is annoying!
Deserving to die!
Especially those that oppose me,
and that I hate deep inside.

I hear them talking,
their voices,
boiling my blood,
raising my temper!

I'm getting ready to strike.
Ready to lash out,
raise my claws,
and dig my teeth into their necks.

So they will live and speak
no more.
All that's left,
will be their bloody corpses.
Laying in front of me.
Never to annoy again.



Dalysa Zinsmaster May 11, 2007

 

[ShinSora]

Deep, and revealing, I like it.  

[R0bot0]

It shows feeling, but no rhythm to it.  

[Celeste_Nightshade]

You're right...it was a REALLY angry one XD lol  

[Zalgoain]

hehehe that poem sounds like your a werewolf or something!
I like it.  

[Celeste_Nightshade]

Thanks ^^  

[Zalgoain]

I like you poetry style. it has no specific rythm which is what life is like because life is hectic and stuff. your poems have the rythm of life. that's wonderful. even though it's a pretty angry peice of writing.