so I did a website for school right?

[Burn Halo]

http://burnhalo.angelfire.com/

it was a project so i decided to surprise my teacher with it what do you think besides having to much info and the links not working?  

[rtfct]

Hm, I think some of the images are broken. I only see a row of links, a header with type on it, and a music player.

Is that all of it so far?

Ah, nevermind! It loaded correctly.

*looks it over*

I like it. Everything is organized neatly and clearly, which is very important for a website relaying lots of information.

I think your teacher will like it. smile  

[SacredDemon17]

Looks nice and organized, good job.  

[Dante Demoness]

When I load the page two ads get in the way of the top div. =/

Problem with music- Sometimes music gets a bit annoying when loading the page.
(their speakers might blast, ext.)
so it's good you have a clear pause button on top.
-- NOT saying your music sucks. Just stating for future reference.

Color scheme is nice, you can see everything clearly.

The paragraphs seem a bit cluttered.
It's very neat and organized but everything's so close together.
Maybe use some php. smile

If I was your teacher I would be amazed, good job on everything!
It's nicely laid out and the images are very nice to look at.  

[treatable chick]

Cool job.  

[dapper apple]

I really like the colour scheme -- wish there was more of that gold/brown in the blog below though!
CSS would be awesome here for the text: justified would look a lot better (imo), with the italicized text the same size as the rest. (:
Everything looks great though -- though I thought I should mention, you spelt Deviantart.com incorrectly (you just forgot the first 't').

But overall it's very well organized && clean! Great job! ^^

 

[Burn Halo]

dapper apple

I really like the colour scheme -- wish there was more of that gold/brown in the blog below though!
CSS would be awesome here for the text: justified would look a lot better (imo), with the italicized text the same size as the rest. (:
Everything looks great though -- though I thought I should mention, you spelt Deviantart.com incorrectly (you just forgot the first 't').

But overall it's very well organized && clean! Great job! ^^

:O oh man i did D:
i did it at 2am morning before school xD

@Dante php? no clue lol xD  

[Burn Halo]

Dante Demoness

When I load the page two ads get in the way of the top div. =/

Problem with music- Sometimes music gets a bit annoying when loading the page.
(their speakers might blast, ext.)
so it's good you have a clear pause button on top.
-- NOT saying your music sucks. Just stating for future reference.

Color scheme is nice, you can see everything clearly.

The paragraphs seem a bit cluttered.
It's very neat and organized but everything's so close together.
Maybe use some php. smile

If I was your teacher I would be amazed, good job on everything!
It's nicely laid out and the images are very nice to look at.

ads are my enemy cant get rid of them except with adblock but i realize not everyone has it
but i can take them off D:  

[Salliewalker]

Muy Bien. Really. That, and it's not bad at all wink .

You COULD add a few more things to it... graphically. Like a spare brush or shape/object or two.

And the musicplayer is up high by the ads, on my up-to-date Firefox.

Good scheme. Neat.  

[Burn Halo]

Salliewalker

Muy Bien. Really. That, and it's not bad at all wink .

You COULD add a few more things to it... graphically. Like a spare brush or shape/object or two.

And the musicplayer is up high by the ads, on my up-to-date Firefox.

Good scheme. Neat.

thanks biggrin