Motivation : Freestyles.

[ReIevant]

Welp, everybody. Next paycheck, buying that expensive a** $1,500+ laptop I need. Once I get that in, I'll actually be going back to recording again.
Till then, I want to write AS MUCH AS POSSIBLE, and keep up the flow even when I do get the laptop in.

SO, I came up with an Idea as MOTIVATION.

I am posting this in almost all the guilds I am in.
Give me either a Beat, a Topic, or an already existing Verse that you have made, and I will write something to it.

Please keep in mind that I do not rap about things I know nothing of (mostly), so when it comes to things such as "gangster life" or "drugs", I won't be doing topics like that.

Feel free to type freestyles in here also, it'll help my creative flow as well.
Lastly, give me feedback! I think I'm improving, which is very good.
Check out my Journal if you want to read my freestyles and rap battles.

 

[Prophecy247]

I'll post my last freestyle since i didn't get much feedback on it. This goes to tupac's keep ya head up beat.
I just wanna say that this is the deepest thing i've ever wrote real talk

Life is tough anywhere you go
Your choices define the ending of the road
I look back at my life and all the years
Just thinking about the pain makes me shed a tear
Always thought i was the only one who had to worry
But everyone has a story, on the way to glory
I have a friend who's momma is dead
Got caught and shot in someone else's bed
Used to know a girl but she not here no more
Hung herself when she found out her mom was a whore
Its hard to put food in your mouth
Living with no education or a home in the south
I'm just saying be grateful for the life you have
You could be like my homegirl, without a dad
He died last year from brain cancer
He was the only inspiration for her to become a dancer
Now she does drugs just to deal with the pain
Guess all the money spent teaching her dance lessons was in vain
That's why i thank god every day that i have my health
I've got family, that to me is better than wealth
Because who is gonna be there when the money is gone
My family will, thats why their in this song
Me and my mom used to move houses again and again
It isn't right to be robbed at the tender age of ten
They took everything even my sega and my nintendo 64
I cried that day until i couldn't cry anymore
When i got older i did a felony and went to jail
You should've seen my face when i was told i wouldn't make bail
The only one that was ever there for me was my mother
Daddy cheated on her so now he's a goner
I wrecked my brand new car when i drove it on the 1st night
Shouldn't have tried to beat the light
This song is for my grandma, you know i miss you
Remember that everyone has issues
That's why i stay on course and follow my dream
So one day my name will be on the tv screen
Sometimes i feel like life is so corrupt
But things will get better so until then i'll just keep my head up.  

[ReIevant]

Instrumental : Tupac's "Keep Ya' Head Up"

Keep ya'...head up, and make sho' ya' shoulders are strong.
You gotta'...shoulda' the wrong, correct it untill it's gone.
That's why I spit it out in lyrics, put it out in my songs.
Makin' sure the troubled hear it, let 'em know they not alone.
'Cause trials are just miles that we can manage with time.
Just put on a smile proud while showin' you're subscribed to God.
Grab the mic, tight, and put your life into what you write.
And then you might brightin' the life of one in the same fight.
s**t, if education is the key, then so many are locked out.
If dumbness was punches, then bunches would be knocked out.
There was the door of opportunity, and so many just walked out.
A life of peace and prosperity, so why so many clocked out?
I promised to spit with conscience by lots and many.
And wander away from nonsense like pac and biggie.
No diss, I just won't live a life of hate, and end it on that basis.
Lifes more precious than that, too many lovers, things, and places.
We all are created the same, visioned by the one who makes us.
Life was made from the one above, so love it's many faces.  

[Prophecy247]

I was feelin yours 4real. cool I made another one but it's not as good as the 1st one i posted. It goes off the "ready or not" beat from "the fugees" I call it young thug love.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LJ6g6pmN6Yo
I'm gonna find my girl because im her master like a guru
She lost her virtue, my loving has her up all night no curfew
This pickle deals(dills) you, Youn's lyrics are so sour like mildew
Your body is a recruit, and my private won't hesitate to drill you
I'll never kill my boo, but my sex is something that she'd die for
If she wants more, my love gun does a drive by at her front door
Believe me, our nighttime ******** never ends
She only calls me buddy because my d**k is her best friend
I know i offend, but that's my definition of young thug love
Its addicting, non restricting, like your cabinet full of strong drugs
No hugs, from me only pounding in the bed
Call it fight night, time for her to have a battle with my d**k head
When i c** its the best she's ever had
It makes us both glad, that's why we never go to sleep mad.  

[Prophecy247]

I'm still in the process but since So Amazin left for a bit i thought i'd make a freestyle about him using Kanye West's Big Brother beat lol.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L7bgeZv5NMc
Do i gotta spell out or tell bout S-O-A-M, A-Z-I-N-G
aka the triple h rap king
Even though i always called him my rival
Not that he's gone i can't wait for his re arrival
I started off not knowing how to flow
Then with time and effort i started to grow
My first opponent was Icy Pimp aka JE
I gotta admit his flow was crazy
When i spit my s**t i thought i was 5 stars
The 1st thing so ever said to me was that was only 4 bars stare
Eventually my rhymes and lyrics got better
Not i wear the rap game like a brand new sweater
Then i started posting in the slaughterhouse
I felt like it was an open field and i was just a mouse
But i talked my s**t and the other cats ran in fear
Now my name is the one they cheer
I went up against him in the Lion's Den
Called him out and almost got beat again
He helped me get better tho, he's still my friend
Idk if this rivalry will ever end
Even tho, he's a guy i barely even know
The respect i have for him makes him my bro.  

[Prophecy247]

I got another 1. I call it i chose you. Off the players anthem beat.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Dd1PeKqsAp8

I chose you, that's what i said to my 1st lady
Little did i know that she would have my baby
Now i have to pay all this child support
Ended so poor i sold my chains as a last resort
Why was i so stupid to give away my love
Must've been high but back then i didn't do drugs
We started to fight and she played with my emotions
Now she got me at the store buying baby lotions
I wish i could go back and do it all over again
instead of being with this girl i'd say lets just be friends
I'd do it different, and go out and change my stars
Could've went to college and still had my car
It was 2 years later i found i wasn't the father
Wasting all my money on this chick why did bother
Story of an author, the kid was never mine
Then i realized, that this woman took up all my time
So now i'll never love a ho and give nothing for free
Im Omarion, got an icebox where my heart used to be
Give a b***h an inch and they'll leave your heart broken
I swear she used my kindness like a free money token
The way she made me feel almost left me in depression
I guess hard is the way that i had to learn my lesson
No stressing, god don't make any mistakes
The moral is stay a player being a young dad isn't great.  

[Prophecy247]

This is for my haters I call it Feared. Using Drake's "Fear" beat.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cZMpchXIYrs

I don't know why haters still try to diss
Think its because in truth you really missed
It's like a ***** can't take a break
My flow put you to sleep so that it could stay awake
Honestly im you young rappers baby sitter
If you were feening for good rap im your drug dealer
Feel that my raps are unfinished i don't care how you feel
Say my lines are fake but you've never read nothing more real
And whack rappers rate me as a ******** 6
That kind of crazy talk just makes me sick
Those kind of numbers are what your chick rates your d**k
I shake haters off because you suck worse than ticks
Funny how they say my words are vile
Yet they've never heard any of my freestyles
Youn Flo is on trial for being an artist
All of you that battle with garbage have never been a part of this
Hate it when you say i can't flow that good
But flowing like me yeah they wish they could
With me things never go the way they should
I start to doubt if i'll ever make it out the ******** hood
Guess that's what i get for expressing
There's too many damn reasons why im stressing
sorry im not like you but your rhymes are depressing
They talk a whole lot of s**t but can't admit that im impressing
I've always kept my bars moving
All you can say is that he's improving
Punks know now i've been putting them in the ground
When they stumble on to my real s**t they'll realize im profound
How many bars do i have to spit
For you to say Youn Flo is legit
Instead of typing on a page
Why do those that know me say i should be rapping on a stage
At first i just did it for the hell of it
Not for the big bucks
You say the famous ones are better well i don't give a ******** of them just got famous out of pure luck
Well my haters have my sympathy
I spit bars like a symphony
Too bad i already know that their into me
Because my lyrics are more real than the industries
So i keep going at it with the wordplay
Don't give a ******** what the haters say
Damn the bastards that don't know the truth
Or said that i would never spit in any booth
Im just so tired of this kid s**t
Wonder if my fans will ever read this
Even if you don't admit that your a fan
In the back of your mind you know Youn Flo is the man
Always came in with a game plan
Sometimes i feel like im just being scammed
You know your the best when your words have been banned
For spitting hurtful rhymes on accident like a traffic jam
Sorry to disappoint but im not going anywhere
Youn Flo the lion is gonna stay here
The way the haters make me feel almost makes me shed a tear
I apologize didn't mean to be the rapper that you all feared.
(Chorus)
(Don't believe the lies, look me in my eyes
Please don't be scared of me, please don't be scared of me
I remember you, this feeling isn't you
Please don't be scared of me, please don't be scared of me.)  

[Mageda]

These verses are gay as ******** a way that sucks.  

[ReIevant]

Mageda

These verses are gay as ******** a way that sucks.

If you have any constructive criticism, we'd appreciate your unput, but if you're just aiming to be a messy b***h (which you're doing a very good job of), I'll have to kindly ask you to shut the ******** up.  

[Mageda]

ReIevant

Mageda

These verses are gay as ******** a way that sucks.

If you have any constructive criticism, we'd appreciate your unput, but if you're just aiming to be a messy b***h (which you're doing a very good job of), I'll have to kindly ask you to shut the ******** up.

Gtfo, it was a joke. wahmbulance  

[Prophecy247]

This is my "Miss Me" Remix.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VuyLiyezyNk
Oh s**t ***** this my ******** jam
Kicking rookies out like a door to door scam
That lion Youn Flo about to drop another classic
All these fake rappers looking like they're made of plastic
My flow so spastic, yea that means im something crazy
Like coming home and finding that i've eaten all your babies
Got an unbeatable record like 9-0 or better
Balling like the spurs in my black and silver sweater
Not from Orlando but i bet i spit some magic
Monster of this rap s**t im known to wreak havoc
So a hater better panic, because this gonna be too long
500 posts and over and im still going strong
Yea bitches this my song, so leave my s**t alone
If you wanna call for help you gonna need more than a phone
Im not B.o.B. but i am a Beast of Beats
And you know i pack heat but im not from Miami streets
Yes i do own a chain but your a** is about to hang
Blasting through the south like my a** was in a gang
Don't ******** with a lion he'll leave your s**t a carcass
Pushing past the haters like my name was DeMarcus (Ware)
Massacre the fakes and i leave nothing behind
A gangster going Black Op i leave nothing alive
Please Lord its not my time, just forgive me for sinning
But im gonna close this game up like it was the 9th inning
They all fail at life so stop all the pretending
My lines are super powered so your bars i'll start bending
These broke losers ain't winning, none of them are dependable
Call you all Stallone because you all are expendable
The opponents i am ending so bow down to the General
Be thankful your still breathing i could eat you like a dinner roll
Still they're not ready tho hope you missed while i was gone
Flo just rose again like the coming of the dawn.