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Detrick II

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 28, 2010 2:48 pm
Open your eyes, take a glance,
At the worn fighter taking a stance,
To fight for his love, giving his all,
Only to fail miserably; there he falls,
Left by those meant to support him,
He resents them saying,"Forget them",
Alone he rises, and walks away from this,
Says no goodbyes because there's no on to miss,
Forgotten and sad yet cries no tears,
Because its been like this for years,
No friends, no lovers, no one period,
Cares not for complaints, he's no longer hearing it,
Feels love from no one so the whole world will see,
That in this life the only one he loves is me.
 
PostPosted: Mon Jun 28, 2010 8:45 pm
I like your choice of words and the flow of the poem. You did really good. biggrin And of course you should join the guild!  

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 9:05 am
You have nice flow. Great word choice. It didn't sound like you forced the rhyme at all. And of course join the Guild!
 
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