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[SilentBlade01]

Name:
Namichi Hao ( Hao - how, Namichi - Namitchi )

Aliases/ Nicknames:
Hoa

Physical Description:
White male With Black Pupils and black hair. Upper torso muscles, including the arms. Earrings in both ears. Wears heavy plated armor on both hands and feet. Wears a red pants and a white robe to cover his chest. Hao Shikai Bankai Cheshire

Age:
Shinigami Years 666. Human Years, Died at the age of 22, on august the 2 year 1454

Zanpaktou's Spirit & Name:
Cheshire

Zanpaktou:
not Achieved

Shikai Release:
Blow the flesh off the noisy, Soar Cheshire.

Shikai:
not achieved ( In thiss form Cheshire's reatsu forms a head around the hand-protector it is used for both offence as defence. Offence, The Spirit shoots off high compressed air currents, Cutting anything it is path. Defensive, It makes a barricade of air protecting its master from harm. )

Bankai:
not achieved, ( Speed enhancing Jet, Razor sharp claws, Witch can extend out from its body and cut trough anything with deadly precision. Cheshire Has the ability to shape it self into a " jet fighter " like position for more speed and deadly attacks. The air conductor on his back can shoot a sharpened pressurised air bullets then in its shikai form. )

Special Accessories:
Heavy plated Boots and hands gloves. White robe with an highly tough synthetic material that gives extra protection. Two Earrings With a star shape that represent Cheshire

Skills:
Highly skilled in speed and kido. Has the "eye of the eagle" Enabling him to look far ahead.

Personality:
Ever since he came to world of the dead he has bin alone, And he prefers it that way. He likes to think act and move his own path his own way. Has a great dislike for people who think they are better then every one else. Also the people around him that talk to much. Likes, To Shed Blood of those who stands in his way.

Biography/History:
Lived in the Year 1400. Hao was born under a certain star, which made his parents abandoned him in the temple of the high priests. It was the star of Cheshire the god of wind. There he grew up alone most of the time, at the age of 9 he was more powerful then most of the priests there. He started to feel a strange kind of power coursing trough his vines. The little Hao Started to challenge the priests to duels killing them after words for being to weak. it took him a year to kill al the high priests in his temple, and so he became the only one, the last priest of his country that could protect it from demons. Something hao almost became, if it wasn't for the emperor jiro Jakisame. The kind emperor stopt the rampaging child by offering his life to stop his madness. Hao was startled at the mans kindness to sacrifice his life to save those in the village and so his vines stopped pumping the power trough in its body locking it self away. the years after that Hao and Jiro worked together to get the most out of the land they lived in as kings. but soon at the age of 19. Hao started to feel that same power coming back to him, Jiro who respected him as well as feared him for the day that was soon coming, Made sure hao couldn't do harm and locked him up in a dungeon far from the civil world. It was in there that his personality to its form. he started to hate everything and every one around him. he hated the noise that came from the world above and swore that one day he would take his revenge on the king, this how ever only fueled the power in his vines to grow larger and larger. In his time of solitude he met a girl, that was ordered to take care of him. she was the only he trusted as she brought him food and drinks every day fully knowing what and who he was. it held back most the power that was building up in his body. His hatred to men became less as the years passed for she was always there with her. and after 3 years on his 22 birthday something happened he couldn't thought was possible. the girl that took care of him had passed away. a war had bin going on above in the world a war he could have stopped. Hao felt a large pain in his heart something never felt before. he broke the chains and charms that stopped him from using his magic and began to make a circle. it was the sorrece's circle that brought out the most of his power. He spoke an incantation and closed his eye's. Hao had sacrificed his life to make time go in reverse. to a time before the war before he was born like nothing had ever happened. like he never existed at all. The morning that Hao woke up he was in Serreitei, He remembered almost nothing. Only that he hated loud noises and people who couldn't keep there mouth shut, And vague memories of his days as a priest. Hao started to live in solitude in the woods trying to practice his forgotten art. It is there where he forged the armor and earrings he wears now.

Signature/Patented Technique:
( Shikai. Cheshire shoot highly pressured air bullets, With a snipers precision, from the hand guard, Named. Kami's bullet. Bankai, Cheshire and Hoa turn into a "jet fighter" like shape and shoot out faster and more powerful bullets as thy fly by in high speed. Named Kami's silent wrath )

Guild Status:
trainee

Online Schedule:
Any time I can.  

[Awesome Sensei]

OH god... I swear I crapped myself this is so horrible. First off, you can't combine with your zanpakutou spirit, if anything your shikai describes your bankai... and still its over powered. Now, lets see what you can do, describe your zanpakutou would be the first thing, because you need to completely redo this.  

[SilentBlade01]

So Its a clompete redo right ? Or can I keep some aspects from the profile ?