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PostPosted: Tue Aug 17, 2010 12:36 pm
I'm drafting up the next two comic pages as I write this. I'm planning to have it take a little detour in the form of a flashback so we can add in a little back story.
I'll transition it smoothly, that isn't a problem, and it'll pick up in the pottery and trading shop.
After we get to the part of him kicking and screaming all the way to the dark castle, the transition back to the present will be an easy one because the dialog gets especially dramatic at that point (e.i. 'Off with your head' and all that).


Like I said, I'm only drafting so if anyone thinks this is a horrible idea I can stick back to the script.  
PostPosted: Tue Aug 17, 2010 8:28 pm
No, a flashback sounds like a decent idea to me. So long as you don't rush it! That way, though, we can get kicked off on the actual story even quicker. Again, just be sure you pace it right. ;3  

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 14, 2010 4:58 pm
Sounds like a good idea. ;D  
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