Wrightings by a Cryptic Star

[Blackjack O Hare]

To Explain the title, i often refer to myself as a "Cryptic Star"... don't know why, I just always have... anyway i was just curious to see what everyone thought of my Poems.

I have 2 styles i often use:
Haiku

Free verse

soooo... I'm gonna start posting them in my next posts  

[Blackjack O Hare]

Some Haiku's


Writing is so fun
I can do it on a run
Hey wow this one rhymes

8/17/2010

One can learn plenty
If they listen to me, though
I am not perfect

8/17/2010

I wrote these just now,
I think myself very clever,
Am I annoying?

8/18/2010

I know your jealous~
My haiku’s pwn with leet skills!
Jealous of my skills

8/18/2010

Samurai cries out,
Shining Steel cuts the air,
Then there is silence.

8/18/2010  

[Alexis Myth]

Gojiron have good luck, posting ^_^  

[Blackjack O Hare]

Free Verse Poem: In Space


Black

The stars line the color, making it seem far less empty.

The fallen bring up hopes and wishes…
But what good could come from a fallen wish?

To capture that star, that wish, that dream!
That would truly bring happiness…
But where do they fall?

One may swim an eternity in the cold dark universe.
See many beautiful places, meet many wonderful people,

But who’s heart was touched by the shine?

Are they really out there?

Perhaps it’s true.

Maybe we only truly get one wish, one star in a sea of trillions.

I will be searching for you,

--- in Space.

I am a young star.

They say young stars shine the brightest,

But I have to wonder

Can you really see me?

In the stream of other young stars is my light blocked out?

Is my glow the same as everyone else’s?

When we cross paths, will our lights converge and explode,

Lighting the way for others to follow…

Or will our lights reflect and never touch?

I will shine brightly, just for you, keep searching for me

--In Space

Gravity

The strong pull forces stars down.

No matter how hard we shine or bright we may glow,

Our voices muffled by the great light of the planet.

Faster,

We fall, circling the globe hundreds of times.

We catch a glimpse, a short blip of each others light.

Then Impact.

We may be far, or only a few feet away.

Will we recognize each other now?

I will find you, you will find me

-- On Earth.