But I don't know about that.

I read it and I was very disappointed. There were a lot of plot holes, and although the language used was very good--lots of interesting words, the dialogue often seemed kind of stilted and rather awkward, you know? Like sometimes it felt sort of unnatural.

It's a cool idea, but it's been done like three hundred times already.
The Pendragon series
The Time Machine
Gregor series....

What do you think?