[ENROLLMENT] [Monster] Altessa; Goblin- APPROVED

[Marushii]

Hi!

Natural Ability: Right now, it reads like she has two different abilities: she can hide in plain sight/be overlooked/hide in places that don't seem like anyone or anything can hide in, and she can change her skintone to blend in:

Hiding in plain sight: After way too many massacres of goblinfolk for the treasures that they guarded, goblins had to learn some new tricks. Altessa is able to slip into nooks and crannies or just generally make herself invisible in one way or another, even if it means hiding in plain sight. What do you mean? There’s nothing behind this lamppost.

Chameleon-skin: Under extreme duress - and only in circumstances of such, as it seems to be activated by stress or adrenaline - her skin can change colors like a lizard. This is limited by the fact that it is unable to take on colors that are not greens, browns, or other colors found in a natural setting.

You'll want to pick and choose one to start with, then you can pick the other half up again when she hits Y2.

Hope that helps!  

[Kanth]

Marushii

Hi!

Natural Ability: Right now, it reads like she has two different abilities: she can hide in plain sight/be overlooked/hide in places that don't seem like anyone or anything can hide in, and she can change her skintone to blend in:

Hiding in plain sight: After way too many massacres of goblinfolk for the treasures that they guarded, goblins had to learn some new tricks. Altessa is able to slip into nooks and crannies or just generally make herself invisible in one way or another, even if it means hiding in plain sight. What do you mean? There’s nothing behind this lamppost.

Chameleon-skin: Under extreme duress - and only in circumstances of such, as it seems to be activated by stress or adrenaline - her skin can change colors like a lizard. This is limited by the fact that it is unable to take on colors that are not greens, browns, or other colors found in a natural setting.

You'll want to pick and choose one to start with, then you can pick the other half up again when she hits Y2.

Hope that helps!

Thank you so much! You are SO helpful. /HUGS FOREVER  

[Zoobey]

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Greetings young knob! Amityville Academy can be a little bit daunting, so here's a quick guide before you go out and explore!

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* Aka if you don't have your student art, you may contact your artist and let them know your student is enrolled! They will then begin working on your character's art.

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*** GO FORTH AND RP!

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[Kanth]

iStoleYurVamps

Okay just some approval pert things~

Nat ability: It reads as a sort of catch all invisibly skill- I'd clarify that she can maneuver her body/positioning so that she can render herself difficult to spot, fitting into places that most wouldn't be able to. If her ability actually makes her invisible or were to say, allow her to blend into shadows, that would read to me as an additional ability. Just be a bit more clear on how she's blending in being 'invisible'.

FEAR: Unfortunately, creating items from FEAR is a no-go. Items or weapons are a reaper only ability. An easy fix is that she creates an orb of explosive energy.

y2 (while we don't approve y2 or above abilities at enroll) I can also say will require same fix. It can't create an item.



Not approval pert: Just keep in mind, Reaper is is a race as well as species, so attempting to become one in that context is uh... having an implication of certain culture things you might not have considered. >__>a

That's all I got~!

Changed both the flavor text in her nat and her FEAR ability. Please let me know if it needs more tweaking!

I believe I took out all reaper implications -- I ended up not wanting to go that route, and just making her a straight monster. It's just way too complicated otherwise, so thank you for the heads up.

If there's anything else that I need to change, please let me know! Thank you so much Vamps emotion_kirakira emotion_bigheart emotion_bigheart