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PostPosted: Sun Oct 02, 2011 11:21 pm
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Character Information

Name- Shiro Dageki
Nickname- Shiro-kun!
Age (Appearance)- 27
Actual Age- 227
Birth-date- 1773
Squad- 2
Rank- 3rd seat of squad 2
Reitsu Color- Copper


Appearance

Eye Color- Gold
Hair Color- Blonde
Hair Description- See pic
Height- 6’7
Weight- 150lbs
Markings- Markings of peace and Anger in Japanese on his back
[和 and 怒り]

Description- Shiro’s outfit was modified the sleeves of his kosode have been removed leaving his arms bear. In Gigai his form is different he’s slightly taller, and he wears a white button up shirt black pants and a vest he wonders to keep buttoned up or not.
Extra- He carries a small panda with ying and yang craved on to the back of it. When he first came to the soul society he was challenged to a small gambling match involving who could drink more. Shiro won, but was almost robbed and proceeded to beat the man and his entire crew with the panda statue leaving imprints all over the men’s faces.

Personality
He is a calm person but he can easily snap and turn to anger, and then he becomes someone entirely different. He works hard and sometimes slacks off when he’s bored and no one is around to give him orders. He can be incredibly stubborn at times, and he has been known to have stand offs even with Captains.

Relationships- N/A
Description-
Likes-
• Booze
• Art
• Girls
• Chess
• A good fight here and there
Dislikes-
• Hollow Roars
• Incredibly sweet things
• The fact he can’t carry his sword in the real world.
• When people say love conquerors all.

Zanpakuto

Spirit's Name- kuroiseijin (Black Saint)
Sealed Appearance- Blade
Spirit's Description- Takes the form of a Priest
Shikai Release Phrase- Raise yourself, kuroiseijin
Shikai Description- His Shikai becomes a staff around 6’0” in length. Has a blade on one end and the other is a sickle.His energy can be drawn into it allowing it to into two pieces connecting the pieces by a black chain. The black chain can extend to 40ft at best and is created from his Reishi, but the longer the chain become the more reishi he puts into the causing it and him to become weaker.
Shikai Abilities-
Kireme kyuuen (Break Eternal):His staff splits into two pieces he holds the blade and the sickle in both of his hands.
Kagirinai pi-su (Eternal piece): He throws the blade and it will keep going till it reaches the maximum length of the chain. The blade glows black allowing it to slice through almost anything in the range of the blade.
Kusari meiro (Chain maze) He traps his opponents in a maze of his chains restricting their movement.
Shoushi kakushu (Midnight beheading): The sickle glows white like the moon. He wraps the chain around the opponents neck then can behead them..


Bankai Release Phase- Kaiissai kuroiseijin (Reap all Black saint)
Bankai Description-
Shiro takes on the appears of his Zanpakuto, becoming a priest [See Zanpakuto spirit appearance] His weapon is now a more elegant staff. The blades center is hollow like the hole on a hollows chest, and a small black flame burns in the center.
Bankai Abilities-
Kireme Kusari (Eternal chain) Shiro raises his staff and slams it into the ground causing multiple black chains to rise from the ground and bind his opponent.
Inmetsu Kusari (Destruction Chain): Can be used with Kireme Kusari. The chains are ingulfted in black flame causing them to explode. If the opponent is wrapped in the chain the opponent will suffer agony before being exploded.
Kuro shuuryou (Black End) The black flame burns darker, and it engulfs the entire blade and the staff explodes into five pieces and flies in all directions surrounding his opponent or opponents. This staff segments grow once they hit the ground and fire chains out connecting them forming a chain prison. ‘End all in my sight.’ Shiro chants and everything in the chain prison explodes and in black fiery mushroom cloud.
Abilities

Kido

Hado # 4,11,31,33
Bakudo # 1, 4, 30, 62

Human World- During his human life Shiro wandered the lands constant getting into fights mostly caused by him and his quick to anger problems. This one day lead to an unfortunate moment when he punched an Japanese general in the face, and he was sentenced to death after taking 10 men to hold him down and capture him.


History


Early Soul Society- Shiro lived a mostly peaceful life in the Rukon district he constantly got into fights, and was even asked to join a small underground fight club. This club was broke up by soul reapers and Shiro was caught after beating up two shimigami who had already drawn their swords. He was given the choice become one of them, or die.

In the 13 Court Guard Squads Shiro decided than rather than being a rough fighter living from bet to bet. He worked hard, and he actually had friends instead of rivals and he was happy, and became a part of 2nd squad. Soon he worked his way up the ladder, and proved himself becoming a 3rd seat. He now uses his power to protect the weak not fight to prove he is the strongest, but that he is strong enough to protect those around him.
 
PostPosted: Mon Oct 03, 2011 1:31 pm
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 03, 2011 2:23 pm
Your final Shikai ability seems to be overpowered. Their moves are already restricted by the chains and that last move just pretty much says,"Yeah, there isn't a way to dodge whats coming."  
PostPosted: Mon Oct 03, 2011 3:15 pm
Okay so besides Shikai everything else okay?  

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 03, 2011 4:13 pm
Besides the Shikai, I think everything is good. Try to find a reference picture for your character, but if you can't then that's fine.  
PostPosted: Mon Oct 03, 2011 4:55 pm
Edited: third Shikai move is now independent.  

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PostPosted: Wed Oct 05, 2011 1:02 pm
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 05, 2011 1:05 pm
Accepted. Check the requirements for joining squad 2, which can be found here -> Tada!  

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