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PostPosted: Mon Oct 03, 2011 6:15 am


Character Information


Name- Zachary Sebastian Hecarte

Nickname- Zach of the Quck Shadow Stitching

Age (Appearance)- About 17-22

Actual Age- When he learns his true age, it is about 17 thousand.

Birth-date- July 11th

Motto - "You are free to sever the chains of fate that bind you..."

Gender - Male

Theme Songs -

(When he shows back up to the Soul Society)
Danson Feat. Amber - I'm Back
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v9i2poHjWmg
(For those who want English subs XP )
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MAOs1_C0S18

(When he starts to get serious. Main Theme song throughout the entire time. )
Within Temptation - The Howling
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U8hJsKn0wzo&feature=relmfu

(When things deal with his memory and love)
Within Temptation - Faster
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=caENELmIXvE

Inner World - A world of never ending doors and stairs. It holds the dual personality as well.

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Squad- Squad 1

Rank- 3rd Seat

Reitsu Color- Violet and Silver

Appearance


Eye Color- Hazel

Hair Color- Dark Brown

Hair Description- Typically short and naturally stylish

Height- 5'7

Weight- 155 lbs

Markings- There are infinity symbols on his wrists and ankles to contain about 80% of his spiritual energies to keep his power in check. The symbols slowly fade over time until he is able to completely control his own power.

Description- Tends to dress in a black attire and keep his look natural. He prefers to dress in flowing outfits. He dresses in casual clothes normally to keep others from staring at him.
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With his hair cut
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Extra- There were also kunai he had. He continued to find them from other people that passed by and make them himself. Uses them for distraction purposes and to combine for his techniques


Personality


Relationships- None that he is aware of. He learns that his parents are dead.

Description- He is kind and caring and tends to help others out before thinking of himself. Holding a dark inner personality, he contains it within himself at all times. It is sadistic and loves toying with others. He himself though, looks more towards friends and books than to war. He seems dark and cold towards new people, he is actually very out going and a happy individual. Although he has the power of a captain, he hates the responsibilities of one. Therefore, he chose a lower position despite having others ask him to have a higher rank.

Likes- Cheese, Pudding, Cats, Meditating, Games, Weather, Cuddling

Dislikes- Stupid People, Judgemental People, Beans, Cocky People, Time Limits



Zanpakuto


Spirit's Name- Muto Vultus

Sealed Appearance- It's more along the lines of a lightning shaped crysknife.It's about 50 inches and gains 5 more inches for each release. (55 for Shikai, 60 for Bankai.)

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Spirit's Description- Muto Vultus is quiet and reserved for the most part. He tends to use his intellect and speed to out match his opponent. He is also kind and strong willed.
Muto Vultus (The Crysknife is usually a shadowed winged lynx. The first pic is his cat form, but all black instead. The second is when he looks more human.)

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Shikai Release Phrase- Alter all life in existance, Muto Omnis Vita

Shikai Description- Crysknife is a sword with reverse edges all along the sword itself. (It has about a dozen different edges.) A chain is attached to the hilt with the end of the chain having a razor-sharp point.

Abilities-
-Blight Existence - Creates a dark shadow over the large area.
-Cat's Fiber - Creates sharp and durable fibers that are used to the offensive or defensive capabilities. Attaches to small weapons like a puppet and uses them to his advantage.


Bankai Release Phase- Alter all aspects in existance, Muto Omnis Vultus!

Bankai Description- His sword turns into both inverted and extroverted ones. The spikes double. It's width doesn't change. It's length changes by increasingly slightly and has two spikes that are visible at the end of the hilt in a 'V' shapped fashion. Has two chains attached to the hilt with the end of both chains having a razor-sharp point. Each edge is able to fire off to create the lynx's cradle and break off whenever.

Abilities-
-Shade's Void - Uses the darkness to fluidly go through.
-Cat's Cradle - Creates replicating, bladed, strings all around him that are extremely durable, controlled, and fast. Much like a spider web all around him. Or it can attack upon his command. Inspired much from nature itself. Is able to thin itself to latch onto other smaller things like hidden weapons such as kunai. (Looks somewhat like this)
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Abilities

-Trained alone. Able to sense his surroundings from extensive years of meditation. His zanpakuto and he are able to communicate at any time from such long periods of meditation.
-Extraordinarily fast, even for the fastest of people. It was due to his lifetime of training that he became so fast. His reactions have been honed to its higest precision. His physical speed is blindingly fast for many to catch.
-Because of his lifetime of increasing his speed, his other skills are not quite as honed.
-Once he learns of his past he will be able to see what is to come. His past will remind him of how to use his own abilities again.
-He is able to communicate telepathically to those he is close to.
- Highly intelligent, he has been able to come up with very non-traditional means of doing things and going about them.
- Tactically intelligent, he uses long-term battles as his way of fighting. Short-term battles are not his strong suit
-Everything he does is his own style of doing it, which is very unique, since there was no one he could train after.



History


Human World- He was abused his entire life, but somehow held his smile. He was known for his faint smile because even after all that has happened to him, it was the only thing about him that could be seen. After seeing what was in store for him, he allowed it to happen. Walking home from his school, he was hit and killed by a vehicle. He died with his eyes closed and a faint smile upon his lips.

Early Soul Society- Awoke suddenly with no memory of where he was nor what was going on. He only knew his name and that he was in danger of some sort. He hurried towards the city and realized, after being there for a while, that being there wouldn't help either. He then fled into the woods and further away from society. Going deep into the forest, he learned to live there and even built a home for himself.

For many centuries, he lived in the forest away from any contact with people. Training, meditating, connecting with nature and animals, he lived in the place he built the entire time. He continued to train to become better, defend himself from anything that may wish to harm him, and to keep the peace as it was. He did all this to also distract himself from thinking about the cities and what happened to himself.

Meditating helped him to forget it all as well. He was able to use this technique to know his surroundings and everything in it. This also helped him to communicate with his own zanpaktou and train with him while in the world they are in now. When other people happened to come by, he knew his surroundings well enough to surprise them and catch them. He would learn as much about what was going on that he could, they would disappear.

When he was no longer able to hold his own curiosity back, he decided it was time to go into the cities. It was time to see what all had changed and to see if he could learn about his past. Now that he was strong enough to defend himself, it was time for him to find some answers. Although he knew he may not like what he was to find, he had to do it anyway. It was time to find out about the outside world and himself...finally

In the 13 Court Guard Squads After he finally got his way to the Soul Society, he worked towards the inner sanctum. Before he got there, he came across someone he thought he recognized. They started to talk about where he should fit in and to catch up. Even though she said he should take a higher seat, he told her he didn't like a position of power with responsibilities. After talking for quite a while, they finally agreed for him to be the third seat of hers. And, he has been there ever since while learning about everything he could to fully regain his memory.


(For those whom it may concern, the block on his memory was made by himself before. There are reasons behind it... Also, anything that would seem obvious, may not be to others. Hence the obvious factors.)
PostPosted: Mon Oct 03, 2011 6:31 am


accepted

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PostPosted: Thu Nov 03, 2011 1:14 am


Hey I checked over your profile. . . and it is a complete godmod that doesn't really describe all of your skills. I am gonna have to ask that you change it.
PostPosted: Sat Nov 05, 2011 6:22 pm


Awesome Sensei
Hey I checked over your profile. . . and it is a complete godmod that doesn't really describe all of your skills. I am gonna have to ask that you change it.


It's not God-modding. Quick, close or far ranged combatants can take my character out. But, I can alter some skills if you state which one and how. Lol

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 05, 2011 10:20 pm


every single shikai ability is the strength of bankai, and all bankai skills are out. As For your future sight that you didnt explain please do, and your character can't miraculously become godly strong after regaining his memory. . .also note that your character doesn't begin with bankai or shikai. all skills about your characters untouchable speed needs to be changed for its too vague and his spirit shield and kunai are needing to be scrapped.
PostPosted: Sun Nov 06, 2011 1:20 am


Awesome Sensei
every single shikai ability is the strength of bankai, and all bankai skills are out. As For your future sight that you didnt explain please do, and your character can't miraculously become godly strong after regaining his memory. . .also note that your character doesn't begin with bankai or shikai. all skills about your characters untouchable speed needs to be changed for its too vague and his spirit shield and kunai are needing to be scrapped.


My character wasn't meant for Godding. There were plenty of flaws in them. I made it even more so obvious now. I understand the shield for some ppl. But, the kunai? I don't understand why ordinary kunai would be a problem. I have drastically weakened the character. smile

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PostPosted: Sun Nov 06, 2011 10:28 pm


What's with the past thing. . . I don't really understand how your character gets so strong, and I don't allow that really.

The zanpakutou's sealed appearance is a zanpakutou, its not a dagger. (Some other mod can correct me with that, but this is as far as I know)

Your shikai description needs work, I don't understand what its saying.

Cat's cradle is not allowed as a shikai attack.

Lynx's cradle is not allowed at all. You need some serious edits for that.

Your top three abilities are not allowed. The "highly intelligent" and "His own style" are the only ones that are okay.The communicate telepathically, I could give you after your character is approved for higher seats.
PostPosted: Tue Nov 08, 2011 6:17 pm


I have a few suggestions as well, along with validations.

First, Sensei is correct. Every zanpaku-to in the history of ever has been a katana, with the exception of course of Ichigo, but that's because he's the OP main character. Rules don't apply to him.

The markings sealing 80% of his power? If it's a permanent seal you're going to lose against everything. Hands down. But if it's not permanent, you need to write that in.

With the 'sealed' zanpaku-to, that's not really a knife. Fifty inches is not a knife. That's a sword. And it should be a katana. I don't know what they allow in other Bleach guilds but every time I've been in one it is the standard katana. Some minor discrepancies, sure, but traditional katana nonetheless.

With your shikai, I agree with Sensei. I don't quite get it. I don't know what the shape is or what the other things are.

Cat's Cradle would be a slightly OP Bankai move, not a shikai, like Sensei said.

And Lynx's Cradle borders on insanity. I've never enjoyed shadow users because they tend to be so cheap but I guess I can't really say no to them, even though your abilities don't really speak much to shadows; it feels like you just tacked the ability to manipulate shadows into your bankai to make it ridiculously powerful.

"Trained alone": The ability to sense surroundings comes with shinigami. They can sense reiatsu, and track people with reiryoko.

The speed is pretty OP, and if you wanted speed to be a priority you should choose 2nd Division, and even then 'the fastest people' would be able to catch you, unless you were a captain.

The thing about the past is just confusing and it sounds like a loophole to further OP your character. Which is kinda lame : X

The last three are pretty alright though, if you choose to go with them. Unlike Sensei, I just don't think you should be able to communicate telepathically unless it resonates with your zanpaku-to a little. If not, there's a kidou for that.



I don't mean any offense but this character really feels like you just slapped a bunch of overpowered things together and tried to get it to pass. And somehow it did.

Anyhow, I figured I'd validate Sensei's words since he did ask for validation in his post.

Hymn of the Silent
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 08, 2011 10:01 pm


OH Hymn, It was Unaccepted, I don't know why Kya accepted it.
PostPosted: Wed Nov 09, 2011 9:43 am


Huh. Well it has the asterisk next to it so I just assumed.

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