Two poems (and a song) by me

[lola_siannodel]

Ok, here's two poems (and a song) of mine. One is a love poem, and the other deals with problems that one cannot flee. The song doesn't really have a beat, because I haven't got teh beat down just yet. It deals with how I love Bankotsu, but he doesn't exist, so we can't be together. Hope you like them! ^_^ Oh, and if your wondering about the name, that's my real name. They'll be in the next 3 posts.  

[lola_siannodel]

Poem Number one.

Katerina Campbell

My Darling Bankotsu

I love you
Bankotsu
I love you with all my heart


I need you
Bankotsu
I need to hold you in my arms



I'm obsessed with you
Bankotsu
I just can't help it



I love you
Bankotsu
I love you with all my heart

 

[lola_siannodel]

Katerina Campbell

This place


This place
That's not a place
nor a point in space
This strage case


They're a problem
I cannot flee them
for they come
as I come



This pain
Not from an whip, or a cane
like I'm not sane
that kind of pain



My love
Sometimes like a dove
Then like a demonic glove
That posseses those who love



This place
That's not a place
nor a point in space
This strage case

So any way, this poem is about, well, you know how most problems are at home or from bullys? Well, jackasses do cause me problems, but this has to deal with problems I can't flee, ya know? Because they're emotional. It indirectly deals with my love for Bankotsu, but also insecurity and stuff such as that. Liek whne I feel like I'm an idiot, or I'm ugly, or I'm a bad artist. When I feel down.  

[lola_siannodel]

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[lola_siannodel]

Ok, now the title is lying, for here's a new poem!

Katerina Campbell

A Wilting Flower


She is like a flower
Wilting on the window sill
Just left carelessly
By a person either too busy
Or Just doesn't care


She was once a beautiful flower
Full of color and life
Now she's dieing
And her petals are dry and black



Most others didn't understand her
And rejected her
Ignoring how sweetly she smelled
Or how beautiful her petals where
And even the bees rejected her,
Dispite her wonderful pollen



She gave up
She just stoped trying
What was the point?
When no matter what she does
No one would care for her?
No one would sniff her
Or water her
Or love her.



So she wilts and dies
On the window sill
Hoping deep in her heart
For someone to sniff her
Someone to water her
Someone to love her

This poem didn't rhyme, for I feel that poems are an expression of one's self and emotions and don't have to (Have I already said that?). So any way, this one I'm going to have you decide what it's about. Poetry is alot better that way.  

[I am Jaques colon]

I suppose that they're alright. Nothing groundbreaking about them, but they aren't bad at all. My advice to you, though, is that next time you should put all 4 in your original topic.  

[lola_siannodel]

lancekatre

I suppose that they're alright. Nothing groundbreaking about them, but they aren't bad at all. My advice to you, though, is that next time you should put all 4 in your original topic.

Of course not ground breaking. sweatdrop I am 14. But your advice is appreciated.  

[Gachetemas]

What's a strage case?

I loved them all except for the first one. You are sooooo funny! That would be a great song! I'd love to help you on the music if I can, and let me know about any of your other poems or songs!