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 Posted: Tue Dec 04, 2012 8:40 pm
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AMITYVILLE ACADEMY ENROLLMENT FORM
Name: Dylan Wolfgang
Nicknames: D.W.
Gender: Male
Age: 13
Height: 4'9
Faction: Monster
Race: Werewolf
Natural Ability:
Shapeshift - Dylan will turn into a black and white wolf. When he isn't in a battle or not angry, he will take on a normal wolf form. However, when he's in a battle or angry, he will take on a ferocious looking werewolf form that will stand on two back feet. (If this too much, I will make this form into his Y2 Fear Ability that will raise his attack or something like that)
Personality:
Dylan might seem cold hearten and right down hateful toward other people at first and tries to put on a cool, indifferent front, but those who really know him can see that there's a soft side under that tough guy exterior. When he becomes friends with another person, he's really loyal and faithful to them. Also, he tries to protect them with all his might and strength whenever they're in danger.
Background Story:(Still working on this taking a break)
When Dylan was much younger, he lived in a grand powerful pack of Werewolves that were renounced for their ability to gather Fear. However, one simple request from him that led to the destruction of his whole pack.
It was a warm October Frightday and he wanted to go over to a friend's house to watched his favorite band. They were performing a concert on the skellyvision and Dylan couldn't get the channel at his house. So he asked if he could go over to his friend's house
His parents were not eager about his requested because they were due to go hunting for Fear that weekend and his Grandmother had this dreading feeling that day. However, upon pleading to his grandmother. Relented and letting him go to his friend's house, she was still nervous.
Love of music:
Whenever he hears music, its remind him of his mother. When he was a cub, his mother hums to him as he falls asleep. This made him love music so much that he learned a way to controlled sounds with his own two hands. Using his new find power, he learned to controlled music and sounds in fights and used it against his opponents. Whenever Dylan in a fight, he puts his DJ headphone on and listen to music as he gets in a fighting groove.
Love for his Minipets:
After Dylan's pack was murdered, all he has was his grandmother. Because of this dreadful event, it left an emotional scar on him. Which made he become frightened of everyone, but his grandmother. After a year, he began making new friends. However, his new friends were his minipets that his grandmother breeds for him or he caught in the wild. As he built a close bond with them, Dylan treats them as his own pack members. If one of them gets lost or sick, he becomes really upset.
Dylan's Quotes and Puns:
"Had you ever danced with wolves before? Because, you are about to be dancing with one right now!" - about to fight with someone new.
"Do you do a request? Could you just beat it!" - Want someone to leave him alone.
"That music to my ears!"- He agreeing with someone.
Why are they enrolled in Amityville Academy?:
As Dylan turned thirteen, his grandmother enrolled him at Amityvile Academy. Her reasons for the enrolled so that he could make some friends and having someone that he could opening up to. However, Dylan got other reasons for the enrolled at the Academy. Which he wants to learn and controlled sounds and music even better as he is seeking to get ravage on the Hunters that murdered his family and friends. He wants to show them the true meaning of fear.
FEAR Ability:
Rapid Beat Blast
Offensive/Swift Strikes
Dylan fired many sound blast at his opponent. When they hit on impact, they will make a loud sound. When many of them hit his opponent, the sound turns into music as each hit would be a music note. (Kind of like firing a small Ki Blasts like the Dragon Ball Z Characters. But Dylan used sound blast.)
Physical Description:
Eye Colour: Yellow
Hair Colour/Style: Black hair with white bangs/Ashen Marionette (Gaia hairstyle).
Skin Colour: Tan
Clothing Style/Colours:
Orange Shirt and Black Vest
Black Fingers Gloves
Black Skater Cargo Pants
Orange and White Sneakers
Orange and Black DJ Headphones with white skulls on the ear parts
Extra: Black and white wolf tail and black pointy wolf ears in the place of normal human ears
References:
Minipets:
Eyepod:
Beat it - Micheal Jackson
Bad - Micheal Jackson
Thriller - Micheal Jackson
Gangnam Style- Psy
Honest Eyes by Black Tide
Role-Plays
{ Amityville Open House } ALL STUDENTS + GUESTS INVITED - Evert Role-Play
[PRP] New Experiences [Dylan/Xiu] - Tour of the School
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Posted: Tue Dec 04, 2012 11:14 pm
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Posted: Wed Dec 05, 2012 7:53 pm
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Posted: Wed Dec 12, 2012 3:41 pm
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Posted: Tue Dec 18, 2012 6:32 pm
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Hello Sheyenne Thunderstorm, and welcome to TiH! Sorry for taking so long to get to your crit, and I hope you're having a great holiday season!
First I want to say I think Dylan is really cute personality wise! His love of minipets and his tie ins to music, especially with regard to his FEAR, are very cool! I can definitely see how he'd have a good time making friends even though he tries to be a 'tough guy'; as there are a lot of minipet enthusiasts at Amity!
I would suggest maybe adding a little more info in his personality or perhaps just reorganizing it! Maybe add a few more sentences to his 'love of minipets' and 'love of music' and then combine them with the information you have in the personality section? As for him being 'tsundere', I think instead you can probably just say something like, "Dylan likes to put on a cool, indifferent front, but those who really know him can see that there's a soft side under that tough guy exterior!" as it seems to cover basically the same idea that I think you're trying to get at!
I think the quote section is also really nice and adds flavor, and is quite funny too! It's nice to see you're getting into the spirit of things at Amity C:
Reason for enrolling - what you've got here is very interesting. I like that he's interested in exploring and controlling his ability with sound, as that's a very unique aspect to his character. Wanting to be better at combat to be better able to defend himself is also a valid reason, although not as strongas the first. I however would really like to hear more about his backstory and his pack, as it seems to lend a lot to why he's got such a 'tough exterior' type of personality!
FEAR: Is there any reason the sounds have to be turned into 'balls'? He could also just attack with the sheer volume of noise! Just a suggestion, this is not necessarily something you'd have to change.
Physical appearance: No problems here, this looks good!
And that's all I've got for you right now! If you have any questions don't hesitate to quote me and ask! I wish you the very best of luck at getting your character, and again, happy holidays! C:
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Posted: Wed Apr 02, 2014 5:30 pm
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Ravvlet Hello Sheyenne Thunderstorm, and welcome to TiH! Sorry for taking so long to get to your crit, and I hope you're having a great holiday season! First I want to say I think Dylan is really cute personality wise! His love of minipets and his tie ins to music, especially with regard to his FEAR, are very cool! I can definitely see how he'd have a good time making friends even though he tries to be a 'tough guy'; as there are a lot of minipet enthusiasts at Amity! I would suggest maybe adding a little more info in his personality or perhaps just reorganizing it! Maybe add a few more sentences to his 'love of minipets' and 'love of music' and then combine them with the information you have in the personality section? As for him being 'tsundere', I think instead you can probably just say something like, "Dylan likes to put on a cool, indifferent front, but those who really know him can see that there's a soft side under that tough guy exterior!" as it seems to cover basically the same idea that I think you're trying to get at! I think the quote section is also really nice and adds flavor, and is quite funny too! It's nice to see you're getting into the spirit of things at Amity C: Reason for enrolling - what you've got here is very interesting. I like that he's interested in exploring and controlling his ability with sound, as that's a very unique aspect to his character. Wanting to be better at combat to be better able to defend himself is also a valid reason, although not as strongas the first. I however would really like to hear more about his backstory and his pack, as it seems to lend a lot to why he's got such a 'tough exterior' type of personality! FEAR: Is there any reason the sounds have to be turned into 'balls'? He could also just attack with the sheer volume of noise! Just a suggestion, this is not necessarily something you'd have to change. Physical appearance: No problems here, this looks good! And that's all I've got for you right now! If you have any questions don't hesitate to quote me and ask! I wish you the very best of luck at getting your character, and again, happy holidays! C:
Sorry it took me a while to reply back... However, I'd rewrote Dylan's profile. I'm thinking qbout adding a background story to him. However, I tried to add more stuff in the other parts of his profile and tried to fix my grammar as well. |
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Posted: Wed Apr 02, 2014 5:56 pm
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Posted: Sun Apr 06, 2014 5:05 pm
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Posted: Wed Apr 30, 2014 6:53 pm
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Posted: Sun May 04, 2014 5:32 pm
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Posted: Wed May 07, 2014 6:03 pm
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Posted: Wed May 07, 2014 7:27 pm
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