[Q] Hemlock Lightwood the Shaman [Open for Crits!]

[Corgisaur]

AMITYVILLE ACADEMY ENROLLMENT FORM

Name: Hemlock Lightwood
Nicknames: Hemmy
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Faction: Reaper
Race: Shaman

Natural Ability: Spiritual Communication: Shamans with this ability can understand animal SPIRITS and elementals as easily as they can speak with and understand anyone else. They cannot talk to minipets.


Personality:

Often not too talkative... to humans, anyway.
Hemlock doesn't like to talk to people. Generally, he thinks they're a waste to talk to. That's not to say he doesn't talk to them. But usually, he sticks to himself, unless persuaded elsewise. He's okay with other reapers, demons are okay to him, and ghosts as well. HOWEVER, the talkative side comes out once you get to know him. He loves to talk about his heritage, and how into nature he is. If you think about it, he's actually a bit of a hippy. He enjoys natural state enhancers (wink wink) and he feels enlightened when on them. Juniper doesn't agree with the usage, as she likes him to be himself.

Heritage
Hemlock comes from a family of druids and shamans. His mom was a shaman and his dad was a druid. Both of them thought having a familiar would make themselves look weak, and decided not to have them, instead each taking a staff. Hemlock was supposed to accept a weapon, but instead, summoned a familiar, Juniper. June is a wolf pup, who will grow through the years of his enrollment at Amityville.

Beliefs
His ideas make him a little more civil than most. Generally, he won't throw the first punch. However June is very defensive, and will be the one to throw an offensive blow. You know, like a bite.

Why are they enrolled in Amityville Academy?
He was actually the one to apply. He was unhappy with his at home predicament. His parents were always arguing, they were unhappy that he had decided to take a familiar instead of a weapon. They would have preferred him to be a grim reaper, but he wasn't going to have it. He enjoyed his best friend, and they needed to accept that. But unfortunately they couldn't accept that. So he applied and took off on his own, keeping his money he saved from random jobs he's done to pay tuition.

FEAR Ability:
BarkBark!
Even though his family is made of druids and shamans, he does have some witch and warlock ancestry. when he takes his FEAR, June runs out into the field, and as Hemlock recites an incantation, June releases a hyper sonic boom. The hyper sonic boom makes the air shake, and can cause Hemmy to get dizzy if not performed correctly. This is very common. Should improve as the years progress.


Physical Description:

Eye Colour: Purple on colour palette.
Hair Colour/Style: HURR
Skin Colour: White
Clothing Style/Colours: He's really into the style of hipsters, but he tries to take his own take on them. He wears nothing that resembles fur or leather, as killing animals in his family is considered wrong, and he's against it. Anything else though, is fine. All the colours come from the palette in the references.
Extra: Long Flowy Scarf.
References: Colour Palette  

[Corgisaur]

Name: Juniper Lightwood
Nicknames: June
Gender: Female
Age: 5 months


Personality:

Bright For Her Age
June is a young pup, but as a young pup, she's rather wise. Taking into consideration she's a familiar, she's also Hemlock's spirit guide. As a spirit guide, she's wise beyond her age. Being wise doesn't mean she's not a young one though. June is still a puppy, so she has her moments of mere stupidity. But Hemmy loves his Juney just the same.

Spirit Guardian
As a spirit guide, June is also Hemlock's protector. She is the one who has to make sure he doesn't get into extra trouble while he's out and about. This means even protecting him when he gets himself into stupid situations, which he's bound to get into.

Physical Description:

Size: Year 1: Pup.
Eye Colour: Bright Green
Fur Colour:  

[Corgisaur]

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[DarkHeartedSorrow]

Just a quick look through, but your FEAR is a bit off.

As far as I know, familiars can't suddenly change into weapons. You either have a familiar OR you have a weapon, not both.

As for mechanics, there are already set mechanics, which you can find here.. Just choose what type of FEAR ability you want your reaper to have and then use those mechanics.

Juniper doesn't need her own form. Familiars are a part of a reaper's fear and thus are a part of the reaper themselves.

Not liking undeads is a form of racism in this world - which is okay in the setting. It's like a fire demon not liking ice creatures. It's just a part of character development. But saying that he doesn't like undeads and then saying it's not racism is contradictory, even if it's a phobia, because he's still discriminating.  

[Corgisaur]

Okay! Thank you for the crit, I've fixed the form up a bit.

I only have a form for June for personal benefit. xD  

[Corgisaur]

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