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Posted: Wed Sep 10, 2014 2:15 pm


	Name: Candi Dahl Nicknames: Candie Gender: Female Age: 14 Faction: Ghost Race: Possessed Doll Natural Ability: Silent speed One of the creepiest traits of possessed dolls is how they never seem to be where you left them, but you rarely see or hear them move. That’s because possessed dolls have the ability to move silently and very quickly when they want. However, they only use this ability when no one is watching them. Personality: Happy, hyper, childish, neurotic, clingy, creepy/stalker Why are they enrolled in Amityville Academy? Candie wants to make friends and learn how to sing. FEAR Ability: Type = ??? Physical Description: Eye Colour: Black hollows/holes with pinpricks of light. Hair Colour/Style: White Skin Colour: Gray Clothing Style/Colours: Carnival/Ballerina Extra: References: Bitti doll

Posted: Wed Sep 10, 2014 9:49 pm


	While I get the idea you're going for... but sadly a few things overall will need revival. The 'comprised of many spirits' deal: 1 Character=1 person please! Unless there is a really good reason to merit a 'second' or 'more', please keep it to one spirit. This will likely tie into her 'multiple personalities'. FEAR-- The FEAR attack is a short burst of energy directed towards a 'move'. They do one thing and one thing only. Plus- You cannot directly influence another character by mental or physical actions. I would suggest it allows her to grow elongated claws that can inflict deeper wounds or something along those lines perhaps. If you have any questions feel free to ask me via PM or IM. My SN is the same for all sites. The Red Dame

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