This is my first post here, that is my own post.
I am posting my latest poem here, it sums up my mood. This is my style of writing, I like to use bold imagery if you can't tell.
EDITED slightly. Now unfinished.
Oblivious to their own child�s death.
The screaming swoops on the cries
Of a fiery phantoms decaying heart.
Consuming the tender red beats
And suffocating with paranoia�s
Toxic glow.
Ignorant of the despair in the newborn.
Galloping onward in bliss whippings of the green.
The prancing destroyed and a hope of life eradicated
Malice happiness, a blessing indeed,
But remember, she chose it to be this way
Out of her own cowardice.
Unaware of the pain her dance creates.
The growing woman, tiny child,
Weeps of her own selfish losses against
A chest of shallow breaths, cold with their own sorrow
Yet she cannot see past her blindness -
Disgusting whore.
Numb, to a world she has destroyed.
Little fleeting whispers of lyrical temptation,
Spit from the flicking forked tongue.
She killed the dream she helped revive
With her soothing song and piercing lies.
It�s all her fault
C+C please
domokun heart domokun heart domokun An older poem, but one I cherish
Feelings - Complete Piece
Am I unique?
Am I different?
I asked the question yet you don�t hear
Surface ripples, grasp deeper into cool waters
Feel it there? Touch it now?
Beyond the cracked mask of my smile
Behind the crumbling front of battle worn walls
Can you see it? Can you sense it?
There! Undeniable depression,
The force of the waves pounding my heart
Taking a toll that will forever last
Come and share your pain � together make it whole again
Carry on
Carry on
Carry on young fledgling of the nest!
The sweep of wind shall lift your wings
Mine lay broken so here I shall stay
You will meet others along your path
Those just like me � you�re never alone
But what of I? The one left in ruins?
Another empty face with eyes of dead glass
The spark diminished after the onslaught of tears
Never fear, never fear,
More withered flowers in a shell of bloom
Shall underlie your steps
Others like me,
We share the same fragile petals
We are the pillars that hold your temple
But, pray forgive us all! For when our foundations collapse
And under your weight we shall fall
We fall
Into frigid waves of ice we crash
Sink to a floor of forgotten dreams
Though we are fallen angels of night
We still belive
And wish upon the carcass of old hope
That we shall be remembered for who we were
So what will I be remembered as?
I am not unique, I am no different
Others laugh and others cry
I do too
Others smile and others hurt
I do too
There is more to me then is revealed
Like others, I too conceal
Nothing special about this pebble
That�s worn smooth through this short time
My age irrelevant � plenty others like me
My gift � a mere punished memory
Humour bleeds from crooked mouths
Though mine is crooked too
I am replaceable after all
A comfort who has out welcomed her stay
Like the teddy whose fur once kept you safe,
As the warm arms of sleep enraptured your mind
I am falling apart at the seems and bleeding
No amount of re-stitching may help me now
So throw me away
Throw me away
Throw me further then far alone!
Throw me out of sight for I spoil your mind with untold spite
Bury me in a desert of all those unwanted
My bones be crushed by a single sand grain
So broken, I await my soul to be claimed
By the reaper of grim who harvests his crop.
But know this, with my last gasps of a chanced life
I watch you move on in the stream
Watch you find others, just like me
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