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goth_not_emo

PostPosted: Fri Aug 25, 2006 7:15 pm
This is a poem I wrote in class about what is success.

You may think your at the top
but someone can put it to a stop.
You may think you are the best
but you are no different than the rest.
You might think now your big and strong
but people might hate you all day long.
Success is helping the poor, needy and sick
and thats how you gain succes bit by bit.

The funny thing was I wrote this in language arts. *chuckle*
Well thats my poem I hope you like it.  
PostPosted: Thu Sep 28, 2006 4:41 pm
wow thats was quite enjoyable.  

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killerqueen1992006

PostPosted: Sat Sep 30, 2006 1:27 am
wow that was amazing.

i loved the way you structured your poem and the way you gave your subject meaning. xd  
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