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the death of dreams... comment

killerqueen1992006

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Posted: Sun Oct 01, 2006 2:08 am


	Drifting, Floating- an impending disturbance Drifting through the depths of joy, Floating above the despair- impending disturbance Thump, Thunder- A constant beat Thump, the crashing of feet behind the walls, Thunder, the sudden blast of deafening sound- constant beat Crimes, Shrieks- A damaging effect Crimes of pleasure behind the walls, Shrieks of ecstasy radiating from the walls- a damaging effect Creeping, Collapsing- Absolute peace Creeping down to the lion’s den, Collapsing on the dark cool linen- Absolute peace what do you think????? i really want comments

Posted: Tue Oct 03, 2006 3:24 pm

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PAKOofMM

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Posted: Mon Oct 23, 2006 2:15 am


	Your usage of symbolism is extraordinary. It's a very deep poem. I enjoyed it greatly. There is much potential here. biggrin

Posted: Tue Oct 24, 2006 6:03 am


	PAKOofMM Your usage of symbolism is extraordinary. It's a very deep poem. I enjoyed it greatly. There is much potential here. biggrin why thank you... anymore comments anyone?

killerqueen1992006

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