Rhyming tutor please?

[Tipsy Cleavage Penguin]

Yeah I'm a white boy, and I got no s**t on you black boys.
In a rhyming equivalent, you doing trigonometry and I'm playing wit stuffed toys
Does it come naturally? Or do you learn from each other
Is it like a culture or a religion?
I dont get it.
It's like a ******** art form, and I want in innit.

Is their like a philosophy or a rule
That enlightens you or some Buddha s**t on how to rhyme impromptu ol skool
I represent emotion, and I wanna use rhymes on command
Cos rhyming is better at communicating
And it gets so frustrating
Not having anything to say
See I'm writing this s**t here and it takes a few minutes
And as I said before son, I want in innit.

Can youse help me? I wanna fit in
To this culture you got going I want in.  

[Durrtyboi]

ok well that rhyme was pretty good all i can tell you is just keep listenin to music and writing s**t and jus keep freestylin and look at some of these battles and cyphers you'll get better i was s**t when i started but i slowly progressed now im not the best but i would like to say im pretty up there  

[Tipsy Cleavage Penguin]

Yeah I posted some s**t in the other little rambling thread. That's probably my bets s**t thats not a beef.  

[CripNiccaFoLyfe]

jus watch and read battles between people so you get the feel of it  

[Tipsy Cleavage Penguin]

Yes, but I have no 'punchlines', and that seems to be the best thing to have around here. And I cant imagine doing very well at that without stealing others'.  

[Kronox2]

my advice is to never rap  

[OJ [911]]

Tipsy Cleavage Penguin

Yes, but I have no 'punchlines', and that seems to be the best thing to have around here. And I cant imagine doing very well at that without stealing others'.

I'm the only one who does punches over here. HHH is all swagger.  

[Emcee_dub]

punchlines definatley useful but.....ppl tend to think that punchlines the only thing that matters in rhymes wich is not true use some skill of words ppl other wise ur rhymes are just to simple like i leave and example

i don't know what to say but my rhymes are crack
and i'll leave u faceless wether white or black

only to words rhyme in that s**t so it sux in my opinion now
here is skill of word e.g.

the greates nationcreates a faction
of hated resputed useless and faithless passion
mattered phantom pages fact is
fictisiousley practiced
patterns through lights camera ACTION

not battle per say unless u hate dubbayuh dubbayuh
and i ain't even american lol Peace D-Dub